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FIC: Terms of Bereavement (Toki/Skwisgaar, NC-17)

Feb 26, 2009 16:00

TO: purplealert
FROM: twilightspeaks and gwynbones

Title: Terms of Bereavement
Pairing: Toki/Skwisgaar
Rating: NC-17
Timeline: Sometime after Season 2.
Warnings: Angst, some hurt/comfort, mention of a side character's death. Graphic blowjobs, frot, fluff, and so on.

( The call came at eleven fifteen that morning... )

gifts: *fic, gifts: *rated nc-17, made by twilightspeaks + gwynbones, gifts: toki/skwisgaar, made for purplealert

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[ *sporfle!snort* ] supes_ February 26 2009, 22:51:19 UTC

partially because it's true, partially because it's so very Dethklok...

ok, i admit it, i haven't read this fic yet (one of us mods has read it, of course... i'm just not that mod). >_>

but! that one line, in itself? is absolutely perfect, i agree.

it also -- i must admit -- reminds me very much of my recent post. (which makes it that much more awesome, for being included in an s/t story.)

twilightspeaks March 5 2009, 01:56:41 UTC

Everyone DOES!

purplealert February 26 2009, 23:58:44 UTC

EEEEEEEEE~ /obligatory squeal of delight *cough*

I enjoyed this tremendously. First, bringing out Skwisgaar's feelings under such circumstances came off very real. From the initial dismissiveness/indifference toward her to the progression of it getting to him, bringing out that side of Skwisgaar can be trick, but you really nailed it.

And Toki. ♥ Being as understanding as he was, he was just a joy throughout this whole story. I love that he took some initiative, on top of being tolerant of Skwisgaar being... well, Skwisgaar. xD

I especially appreciate how the dynamic transitioned through this story. Not too rushed, not too dragged on, no questionable moments. It was just right. It ran seamlessly, really sold it. And I love that so damn much.

I'm going to have to second the_ginga about the burning shit line. xD Perfect ( ... )

[ ♥ ] supes_ February 27 2009, 00:35:42 UTC

i... would probably agree with everything you just said, if i'd had time to read the story yet. (why haven't i?! *headdesk*)

but for now, i'll just say this: i am literally overjoyed to see your reaction! this is some pretty brilliant feedback; i can't imagine the author being anything but ecstatic to hear how much you've enjoyed your gift. <3!

and? you make it sound like quite a tempting read. i must find time for it myself, as soon as i can!

[ ♥ ] purplealert February 27 2009, 04:51:50 UTC

Totally ecstatic! By all the comments! Truly!

purplealert March 4 2009, 12:44:39 UTC

VERY glad you liked it, because I was sort of worried you might not (I know it's a little angsty, subject matter wise... which isn't exactly Valentinesesque).

I am also glad you requested it, since this isn't a pairing I do a lot of. :D

peridexion February 27 2009, 01:11:23 UTC

Awww man. Toki's so hot when he's assertive.

twilightspeaks March 5 2009, 01:43:26 UTC

I agreed with this. Wholeheartedly.

lukadron February 27 2009, 03:35:44 UTC

C:

I couldn't stop laughing after He, on the other hand, almost had a heart attack. "Whoa, shits! Where does you guys comes from?!"

"Uh, America," Nathan explained, less than helpfully. "This morning. You look like shit."

Then it kept coming until the very end of it. Good read

mijeli March 3 2009, 23:35:55 UTC

oh my God.
I broke down.
I...I love you.

mijeli March 3 2009, 23:44:40 UTC

I just decided this was not exactly a useful comment, so I'll add something..even though I'm at loss for words here, seriously. and that hardly ever happens to me. This story DEVASTATED me. It's terrible. I love it so much :'(

I cannot start pointing out lines, because there are too many. This is written perfectly. Every line is exactly how it should be, and so is the next one. There is nothing -nothing- about it that doesn't fit or make sense. The fun, and the grief, and this strange, tormenting distance that fights to become closeness.. it's heart-breaking. The characters are walking on a mine field that is their life; future and past. They cannot be saved, and this made me enjoy this story just as much as I must loathe it.. because really, it left me so upset!!

Don't get me wrong. I haven't read anything like this on here, ever. I probably never will. thank you

[ i... just... ] supes_ March 3 2009, 23:57:40 UTC

GUH, i love this comment. so much. i didn't write the fic... but still. seeing feedback like this makes me insanely happy. as does knowing that there's actually writing out here on the internet that can inspire feelings like this in someone.

...and in my own fandom, at that.

*deep sigh*

Re: [ i... just... ] mijeli March 4 2009, 00:15:25 UTC

I wish I knew who wrote it.. I want to make something for this person >.<

Anyway, you are to praise also for maintaining this wonderful community :) Even though I haven't looked through how it works, exactly, yet, I am amazed by how many fine and wonderful contributions could be collected here!
It is so great to see people put effort into something..yeah,put their hearts and guts into it ;)

thank y o u for making this possible!

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