endings and beginnings

[heartofthestorm]

Comments

[fragmentedsky]

You are so intimidatingly talented, my dear. This is adorable and so, so good. You are an absolute master of characterization and language. I am blown away by this.

[heartofthestorm]

Thank you! I'm always slightly bemused by Brendan getting all the love: I find him very easy to write but can't describe him at all.

What's funny is I started this after you commented potentially asking for muse stuff on that "I'll write you something" meme I posted ages ago. So, asking occasionally wakes something up!

[fragmentedsky]

Well, I love Brendan to death, but I would love to see the others, as well. While I miss interacting with you characters, what I miss more is seeing you write your own original pieces, because you are exceptionally gifted in this regard. You have a sharp eye for human nature and are wonderfully skilled at hitting the right note between blatant and subtle in order to most effectively entice your audience's attention.

I plan to ask more, then/thus, in the future. :p

[the_firedoor]

I really love this, even in bits and pieces. Though I know you will, I'd almost say you didn't have to fill it in because the mood comes across so strongly and you have a good eye for which details you need and which you can really discard. Really, really nicely done.

[heartofthestorm]

Thank you! I've been staring at the bits in between for months, really: The first (...) was supposed to introduce the other people in Brendan's hall and the whole drinking thing, and the second was meant to be drinking, which I guess is why that never got written. (And then there was meant to be more stuff after the current 'end', but nothing is coming.)

Anyway: I'm glad the mood really is there. And I'd feared I was overdoing the details, so it's good to hear I'm not.