Fic: Counting the Falls (Sirius Black) PG

[heartofspells]

Title: Counting the Falls
Rating: PG 
Characters: Sirius Black 
Pairings: Implied Remus Lupin/Sirius Black 
Summary: 'When it happens, it comes fast and hard and it hurts like you wouldn't believe. The air leaves my lungs and my muscles tense and lock and there I am.' Written for the "I'm about to die!"-competition at the HPFC forum. 
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Comments

[olivier_dathos]

Wow this had so much feeling to it! Beautiful and tragic and oh so true. The haunted tone of it really grips you

[heartofspells]

Thank you! I'm so happy to know it had that effect. I was curious about that. ^_^

[olivier_dathos]

No problem :D It really worked for me so hopefully your curiosity is now satisfied!

[aerosleigh]

Oh. Oh.

this is heartbreakingly tragic; I loved it.
the last sentence... Wow. perfect.

[heartofspells]

Thank you! ^_^ I'm incredibly happy that you enjoyed it!