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ashspark October 4 2008, 18:59:30 UTC
Number four was just heartbreaking and hence is my favorite but the third one comes really close... Great job!

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silverblade219 October 4 2008, 20:01:02 UTC
Oh, I love these so much. Poor Allison.

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happywriter06 October 5 2008, 00:18:02 UTC
I'm going to have to read it again because I think I got a little lost. In any event, I like it alot. I really like the first part I feel like John and Allison were lovers in the future.

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ana_jo October 5 2008, 03:04:10 UTC
I love them all!
They are all so beatiful. The last line of four is breathtaking.

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thepouncer October 5 2008, 06:09:50 UTC
I adore all the possibilities in these -- so evocative.

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