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SCC Fic: Iscariot

Jan 16, 2009 01:55

Title: Iscariot
Author: aelysian
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2685
Summary: A possible - but not exactly probable - version of what happened in that basement and its ramifications. Time travel is a tricky bitch.

Note: the basement parts are not happening at the same time as the Jesse parts or the parts with John and Cameron. If that isn't clear. This didn ( Read more... )

fandom: the sarah connor chronicles, character - john connor, character - cameron phillips, character - derek reese, ship - derek/allison, character - jesse flores, ship - john/cameron, ship - john/allison

Comments 5

review! rubyfresh January 17 2009, 00:04:14 UTC

I like this, just enough angst and . . . romance?
Sorry, can`t find the right word. I like how you added quotes from the show mixed with some of the stuff you thought of, that might of happened in the future. It made it that much enjoyable!

=]

ana_jo January 17 2009, 03:27:07 UTC

I don't know if i ever told you but i LOVE how you write! It's my favourite kind of writing. It's angst, and it will probably make me cry but it's so wonderfully writen that it feels like poetry and i love it.
And of course i love this fic. Future_John&Cameron vs Present_John&Cameron are always amazing!
♥

heartfacsimile January 18 2009, 00:18:49 UTC

Aww, thank you! I love angst way more than I should and I guess it shows. I love the strangeness of John/Cameron and FutureJohn/Cameron. It's twisty. And I'm slightly obsessed with Allison Young, if it wasn't totally obvious.

tearlit February 27 2009, 20:10:45 UTC

I'm not going to pretend that I understood everything that was going on here, but I *loved* this! It raises so many questions and leaves so many things unanswered the way I read it (I could have overlooked some things and it could have a perfect resolution but I didn't get it if it did and that's okay!) and I adore that about it. The different stories weaving together was a very nice touch. Lovely, lovely job!!

heartfacsimile February 28 2009, 03:11:58 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I admit that it's kind of vague and confusing but I'm so glad you liked it. It was something that had been tugging at my brain for a while now. Yeah, there wasn't exactly a perfect resolution, beyond the vague establishment of Derek as the instigator behind the Jesse/Riley conspiracy and a little playing around with what happened in that basement.