SCC Fic: Subplot

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Title:  Subplot
Author: aelysian 
Rating: K or PG
Summary:  Heroes are built, not born.  Episode tag to Goodbye to All That.  I swear I can't stop doing these.  Next time?  There will actually be dialogue.  Honest.

Comments

[alexfoster451]

Beautiful and very well written. I liked the little touch of her bumping into the dresser and in spite of herself making a note it was a failure on John’s part to be alert to it. Nice characterization there. Don’t worry about the lack of dialogue; it can be hard to pull off emotion between characters with just looks and touches alone and you did a very good job.

Thanks for sharing.

-- Alex

[heartfacsimile]

Thank you! I keep telling myself to work up to dialogue, but it has yet to happen so far. I think part of me is just worried that I'll mess it up. As awesome as she is, Cameron's mouth is not easy to put words into.

Thanks for reading!

[eugene_carthage]

I like your stretch of imagination :-)

[were_lemur]

They are stealing Sarah’s son and making him into a man prepared for a future she’s still trying to prevent.

Ouch. Very ouch.

[ashe7990]

You made my eyes water while I was reading Sarah's part! That doesn't happen very often...well done. :)

[madjm]

Nicely done! One of the most interesting aspects of the show to me is these two women whose job it is to protect John, but at the same time, they do have very different missions. And it's interesting that Derek and Cameron fall on the same side here.