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jesterlady October 17 2011, 21:19:31 UTC
I'd be willing to beta if you're interested. I haven't read the story cause I've been waiting for you to finish with it before I started, but I've had my eye on it.

If you want you can send it to elentarifimbrethil@gmail.com

I can get caught up on it pretty quickly and I usually have a fairly fast turnaround.

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heron61 October 17 2011, 23:52:29 UTC
I love where this is going, and also your portrayal of Cameron.

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e_witness October 20 2011, 21:00:04 UTC
This is so good. I really can't get over that. :) Derek now. Cameron and Jesse were easy for me to love in the series, but I was always a bit "meh" with Derek, and you've brought him to life here. Your details are fantastic. The differences between Derek and Kyle, peanut butter and jelly sandwiches, theft as a game, the poster, etc.

There's nothing about your writing I would change, so I can't offer to beta, but count me in as a reader. I look forward to the rest!

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aelysian October 21 2011, 02:48:33 UTC
Thank you! I wasn't actually a particularly big fan of Derek either, but he's a surprisingly interesting secondary character to write. And Jesse definitely needs more fan love!

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