♥11 / [YuGiOh!] "Sight the King" 04/21

[killyoudead]

Sight the King - chapter 4
Summary: After Yuugi wakes up at the scene of a crime with blood on his hands and a voice in his head, there's only one thing he can do: Run.

Comments

[dogmatix_san]

Aw, Jou-kun.... ;_; Yuugi's really walked into a pickle this time. "Psychic Puzzles, ahoy!" indeed. *grin* Hmm. From here, I'd say Yuugi wants to run (since there's no way they'd believe him now that he's an escaped suspect, any more than they would before), and other-Yuugi.. probably wants to fight, or confront the dad, or something like, to get Yuugi out from under threat. Really want to find out where Yuugi goes from here :)

[killyoudead]

;_; It made me very sad to write, too, especially since I was just getting in the swing of writing Jounouchi-kun.

Mm, yes. Next chapter ("the god who feeds on his father and eats his mother") is all about Getting the Hell out of Domino. It will be good times, had by many.

LOVE IT!!!

[shamise]

Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it!!!!!!!!! I absolutly LOVE this story!!

I truly enjoy your writing style, it's jsut perfect!

Yami was wonderful in this chapter, I loved the scene where he becomes 'ghost Yugi.'

Poor Jou-kun, too bad he had to die.

I hope the next chapter comes up soon!!

Re: LOVE IT!!!

[killyoudead]

Thank you! Your multiple exclamation points fill me with joy!

God, I love Dark Yuugi in this chapter. And next chapter, too, for that matter.

The worst part, of course, is that Jounouchi-kun didn't have to die - it wasn't a sacrifice, or for the good of anything, or even expected - and that's what real death is.

As soon as I transcribe and edit, here it'll be!

Re: LOVE IT!!!

[shamise]

Woot! Thank u very much! I know I've said this before but poor Jou-kun. Having a meaningless death.

Did Hikari go on a rampage just because she lost a battle?

Re: LOVE IT!!!

[killyoudead]

... yes. Among other things.

[vikki]

The voice in Yuugi's head has arrived

[killyoudead]

DUN DUN DUN! Plot twist - IT'S BAKURA!
hahahahaha. That would be awesome.

Okay. Jounouchi-kun's death surprised me too, if it's any consolation. But at least your hate is deserved and makes you want to keep reading anyway?

Hooray!

Yuugi's mom (who STILL NEEDS A NAME *flails*) very much needs to show that she's not playing second fiddle to Sugoroku. (This also allows me to set up random family history plot points for Yuugi, as these may come up later in the story!)

Oh, I'm glad you liked the very detailed metaphor. I was afraid I'd gone overboard (haha, bad pun) with it.

The walking-off-the-wall thing is new to the rewrite, and I am SO GLAD that it came this way. God, that would just give you nightmares, yeah? Your shadow approaching you, turning in to you, and able to summon weapons? I would be surprised if Yuugi doesn't start having nightmares when he ACTUALLY SLEEPS as his body's basically been up for two days straight without real sleep

[strawberrykaoru]

!!!!! The longness and drama gives me the giddies! I've only started reading the prologue and the previous chapters yesterday and when I saw chapter 3... I had to read it despite I have midterms coming up. >____>;;

I love your writing style - it's absolutely gorgeous. Yami no Yuugi's speech is so...formal, somewhat like a king's (rather fitting, no?); it's neat how he adapts to Yuugi's manner of speech when he takes over his body but falls back to "old habits" when he's only conversing with Yuugi. Hee

[killyoudead]

(holy crap long reply yay!)

^_^ Oh, midterms. Why must you always get in the way of fic?

>_> Ah, Dark Yuugi's 'voice,' I think, keeps switching up because I haven't really found his identity yet. (then again, neither has he, so I guess it works out). But hooray that you like it! He's definitely going to get more casual when he becomes "more comfortable" around Yuugi and in his skin. At least, he'd better.

Hooray IC! That's always my biggest worry (because without that, an AU story is just "yay my charictrs is paztd on" [sic x 1000])

Grandpa... gets some really weird backstory in this. ^_^;;;;;; I think people will not be happy with it, (as I was coming up with it as I was writing the scene with it, I was very much surprised and concerned about it) but ah well.

And wouldn't you want revenge if someone shot and attempted to kill someone who means as much to you as Yuugi means to Grandpa? Especially since Yuugi's generally not the type to fight back - someone has to

[strawberrykaoru]

Holy crap that's a super long reply! o_o

Midterms are also getting in the way of my creative block... I worked so hard to get rid of Writer's Block, eh. D:

I'm horrible with names too... unoriginality, here I come! =D

*rolls around* It's up! IT'S UP. YAY. I reviewed that before I replied this...wtf is wrong with me, haha.

[killyoudead]

*is wordy*

>_> I totally started writing this story instead of studying for finals last spring. Whoops!

I just pick names that look nice off of random Japanese name sites.

[inuconen]

AMAZING!
I love this story, Jounochi is dead nooo TT_TT so sad.

The way you used the ocean waves when Yugi was in the hospital was great, i could practiculy feel there sadness. The way you write is so well too, I love it!

lol when they were done with the conversation, those two janitors, and Yami no yugi was like"... shall I challenge this Sasori Tadashi to a Dark Game, then?" omg i laughed xD he just wants to challenge everyone!
Phsyco puzzles ahoy! <---<33333

I'm getting a tablet soon, be ready for fanart!

[killyoudead]

Jounouchi's death made ME really sad, too. ;____; even I wasn't expecting it.

Oooh, thank you! I was actually questioning using that imagery bit, but I'm glad so many people liked it.

Dark Yuugi... is quite a character.

Psychic or Psycho? Because either way it's pretty true.

*FLAILS* zomg, fanart! YAY!

[inuconen]

prepare for the horrifing fanart >D
yay...*twitch* have to wait for tablet...damn

[killyoudead]

Hahaha, why does everyone keep saying that? ("horrifying fanart") You could draw me stick figures and I'd be happy.