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Sight the King - chapter 18.B
Summary: After Yuugi wakes up at the scene of a crime with blood on his hands and a voice in his head, there's only one thing he can do: Run.
( in which - well. You know. )
Summary: After Yuugi wakes up at the scene of a crime with blood on his hands and a voice in his head, there's only one thing he can do: Run.
( in which - well. You know. )
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Oooh, thank you! One of my major worries is always characterization, so I'm glad you liked it.
In regards to Jounouchi: You should have seen ME! I didn't know that's what was going to happen either [and this is what happens when you start writing before you get a plot in mind], so as soon as Hikari showed up with the gun I instantly knew and started raging for a good fifteen minutes. And then wrote it. And was depressed.
Contrary to Shizuka's attempt at consolation, Jounouchi *is* dead, and is not coming back.
*laughs* Thank you! There's not much left of the story to write, [I say that now... gah, it's probably just going to explode under my hands like every OTHER scene has] - it's just that dark Yuugi is giving me difficulties with his capslocked RAGE MUST DESTROY THE WORLD... ness.
I'm glad you enjoyed this, and I hope you enjoy the rest! The ending... is... it's weird. I'll say that.
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!! This story, in my first estimation, was supposed to be less than half of what it is now. *rages in a very small area*
In the gag ending, Shizuka will take up necromancy and black magic, and zombie Jounouchi will be afraid of himself.
Hahaha, yes, but he's RAGING so much the other character[s] involved can't do their epic Ruining The World [for some] actions.
Well, in my *first* draft, there was only, like, three thousand words after this. I'm pretty sure it's expanded to ten. And will probably expand to another ten-or-twenty after that.
I think I'd cry if this went on for another seventeen chapters.
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