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Wish You Wouldn't (Jack Johnson/Andrew Cogliano)

Sep 13, 2008 03:04

Title: Wish You Wouldn't
Author:heartandmindxx
Pairing: Jack Johnson/Andrew Cogliano [Michigan Wolverines] [Los Angeles Kings/Edmonton Oilers], mentions of Sidney Crosby [Pittsburgh Penguins, but you knew that already.]
Rating: 14A, mature content.
Notes: This story is completely and totally for nefarious1729, because she wrote something for me and this is the best I could ( Read more... )

jack johnson, la kings, andrew cogliano, michigan wolverines, edmonton oilers, 14a, anaheim ducks

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heartandmindxx September 14 2008, 00:54:22 UTC

Oh yes, those boys. Thank you for reading!

lost__emotions September 13 2008, 18:49:52 UTC

Aw, Jack. Aw, Cogs. Aw, these two together. I approve!

This was really well-written. Tore my heart into pieces, but had me smiling wide by the end. Awesome, awesome job :)

heartandmindxx September 14 2008, 00:54:56 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I have never even thought about writing Jack before, so it was really new for me.

offside September 13 2008, 22:07:49 UTC

Absolutely loved this. I wasn't sure how it was all going to pan out in the end, but I'm so glad things ended the way they did. Loved Jack's frustration, and how Andrew was always there for him and just sort of understood. Really lovely. Thanks for sharing!

heartandmindxx September 14 2008, 00:55:24 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it because I wasn't sure if it came out the way I wanted it to. Thanks!

nefarious1729 September 13 2008, 22:34:04 UTC

I cannot believe you wrote it that fast. You are amazing, honestly. Oh my Gary, you were blessed by his holiness. I can't believe that some of this was from that rough draft I sent you. You just wow me ( ... )

heartandmindxx September 14 2008, 00:56:48 UTC

I just kept writing, dude. I was up until 4am and I just worked 8 hours on 4 hours of sleep, but it was so worth it, for you.

I'm glad I captured what you wanted. I wanna thank YOU for allowing me to write this story. Love you forever and ever too! Talk to you soon, probably.

kaatiya September 14 2008, 15:49:27 UTC

I liked this! Your depiction of Johnson was great. And too-big-for-his-britches Sidney. I wondered if Jack was ever really in love with Sid or with his image.

heartandmindxx September 15 2008, 05:43:31 UTC

I think Jack was kind of in love with Sidney before he had such a polished image, when he was just Sid, his best friend, and not Sid Crosby, international superstar. Thank you so much for your comment!