Ooh what perdy writing, kulta! You set the scene perfectly!
I don't mean to be all moany and pretentious etc, but please don't use the word athame for a knife used to kill someone. It was never intended as a sacrificial weapon, more a ceremonial knife...
mmm i know, i just have a bit of a thing for the word 'athame' so it tends to get included in my writing alot, regardless of whether it actually should be... *shrugs*
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i was trying to avoid making to sound too blunt or too corny =)
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I don't mean to be all moany and pretentious etc, but please don't use the word athame for a knife used to kill someone. It was never intended as a sacrificial weapon, more a ceremonial knife...
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i just have a bit of a thing for the word 'athame' so it tends to get included in my writing alot, regardless of whether it actually should be... *shrugs*
glad you liked it though
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breathtakingly gorgeous piece of writing, darling.
<3!
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i appreciate your comments, my dear =)
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