Follow the Reaper

Nov 17, 2006 22:08

A/N: romanticised character death
Dont fear the reaper )

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snowisgreat November 17 2006, 13:49:12 UTC
That was brilliant, absolutely LOVED it!! You are really good at describing in a way that doesn't sound boring or corny, very nice job! :)

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heartagramslash November 18 2006, 00:47:37 UTC
thanks
i was trying to avoid making to sound too blunt or too corny =)

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spiderweb_x November 17 2006, 19:20:16 UTC
Wow. I love the imagery you slipped in there, the metaphors... An amazing peice of writing with a beautiful atmosphere.

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heartagramslash November 18 2006, 00:48:51 UTC
thankyou my dear

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devils_almond November 17 2006, 21:07:46 UTC
Gorgeous! The detail is so rich, I'm completely speechless.

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heartagramslash November 18 2006, 00:51:55 UTC
why thankyou sweetie

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inourblood November 18 2006, 00:04:00 UTC
Ooh what perdy writing, kulta! You set the scene perfectly!

I don't mean to be all moany and pretentious etc, but please don't use the word athame for a knife used to kill someone. It was never intended as a sacrificial weapon, more a ceremonial knife...

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heartagramslash November 18 2006, 00:46:33 UTC
mmm i know,
i just have a bit of a thing for the word 'athame' so it tends to get included in my writing alot, regardless of whether it actually should be... *shrugs*

glad you liked it though

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003lastwords November 18 2006, 19:20:49 UTC
wow that was.. wow.
breathtakingly gorgeous piece of writing, darling.
<3!

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heartagramslash November 19 2006, 01:21:49 UTC
thanks
i appreciate your comments, my dear =)

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