American Idiot fic: I won't care if you won't care

[healingmirth]

Title: I won't care if you won't care
Fandom: American Idiot (musical)
Characters: Tunny, Will
Summary: Scenes from a summer, after the war
Notes: 1500 words. Not inconsistent with To lean on. Title is a purposeful rewording of the Green Day lyric that's been pinging around my head for months.

Also uploaded to A03 if you'd prefer to read there

Comments

[khronos_keeper]

I really liked this. I liked how it was a kind of disjointed ramble, but every time you get a little further down, the whole thing coalesces a little bit more. I like your word choices and your writing style, it's easy to get into, and it keeps pulling my eye down the page. Very engaging.

I think my favorite bit is the very last one. I can't really explain why, I just like it. Good stuff.

[healingmirth]

Thank you! I know things that jump around can be confusing - I've certainly been confused by a lot of them - so I'm glad you found a way through it that worked for you.

[justaotherwitch]

This is gorgeous. And so full and deep in so few words.

[healingmirth]

Thank you :)

[oxoniensis]

I really enjoyed this, the hazy summer finding-yourself sort of feel to it. Beautiful.

[healingmirth]

Thank you!