scraps no.1: all wound up

[heads_bang]

(snippets that I tried to make into a fic but they weren't working out. instead of letting my time on writing this go to waste, figured I'd post it. hell why not?)

Pairing: gd/top
Summary: Jiyong mulls over the reasons why.
1005 words~

Comments

[two_dents]

I've to say that this is brilliant. I love the flow of this, the pace and just everything.

It read like a painting, and I really loved it.

The ending was beautiful, I could actually see this happening.

I can't even begin to explain what I like about this. aljdflk

Thank you for sharing!

[heads_bang]

ugh thank you so much. honestly i wasn't even expecting anyone to read this or comment so it really means a lot.
haha i wanted it to end happier, one where tabi and ji finally got together when tabi realized that kissing wasn't so bad...or something along those lines.
but lol the more i wrote the angstier it got -facepalm- lol this was a majorly failed attempt at fluff.
but im very glad you liked it.
thank you again ♥

[vivoperleix]

hmm, i really liked this! especially the ending part, it feels so real.

[heads_bang]

ah thank you very much~ ^^