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After Eden - Team EWE

Apr 03, 2008 07:54

Title: After Eden
Team: EWE
Author: rickey_a
Prompt: Judgment
Word Count: ~15,000
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): None
Summary: Life threatening injuries are an occupational hazard even for a seasoned Auror, but Harry Potter never considered the possibility of life altering injury. And why is it that Draco Malfoy has to be the one to help him?
Author's Notes: ( Read more... )

nc-17, prompt: judgment, round i, fic, team ewe

Comments 159

absynthedrinker April 3 2008, 14:11:03 UTC

This story is flawless. The timing, tone, plot, and emotional intuitiveness here all combined to make a both joyful and sexually charged story. It has a very masculine feel to it, which is very often missing from fan fiction pieces. Very, very well done

Thank you,

Bubba

rickey_a May 23 2008, 05:05:40 UTC

This was such a nice first comment to see. I truly strive to write them as men. Thanks so much.

tomatoe18 April 3 2008, 16:49:42 UTC

The thing I love most about this story is that it's all about Harry and Draco's relationship from start to finish. Pretty simple in terms of plot, too, but it's satisfying to read nonetheless. I felt kind of sad, though, that Harry had to find out about Draco from other people. But that's perhaps the reason why the ending is so fulfilling. All in all, it's a very enjoyable and lovely story.

rickey_a May 23 2008, 05:06:15 UTC

Thanks for reading and your thoughtful comments.

eeyore9990 April 3 2008, 18:11:48 UTC

Can I just say that I fell in love with this story? I am so proud of our team right now! Absolutely fantastic writing, gorgeous storytelling. And the sex was HOT! What more can a Drarry fangirl ask for?

rickey_a May 23 2008, 05:07:04 UTC

Thanks so much. You were such a support in the locker room and I'm proud that you were my EWEmate.

fourth_rose April 3 2008, 18:39:16 UTC

I'm really impressed that you didn't go for a miraculous healing in the end, but forced Harry to accept that he will have to live with a disability, and deal with it. It made the whole story feel a lot more "real" to me.

rickey_a May 23 2008, 05:07:33 UTC

Thanks so much - that's what I was going for:)

devian_11 April 3 2008, 18:58:45 UTC

This was very nice, enjoyable read. Thank you :)

rickey_a May 23 2008, 05:08:28 UTC

Thank you:) and I saw this on your rec list- that makes quite a few of my stories over there, so thank you for that too.