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Team EWE: 21. A butterbeer a day keeps the mediwizard away.

Apr 23, 2009 14:30

Title: Read My Mind
Team: EWE
Author: smirking_muse
Prompt: 21. A butterbeer a day keeps the mediwizard away.
Wordcount: ~7,100
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Summary: Harry wakes up one morning with a new voice in his head that opens his heart to some of his own.
Author's Note: A billion thanks to Hilary for being my sounding board, to xovrall and Lindsey for their ( Read more... )

prompt: 21. butterbeer a day, pg-13, fic, team ewe, round ii

Comments 89

bk7brokemybrain April 23 2009, 12:30:53 UTC

That was adorable! I loved Draco's obsession with coffee, lol! And Mr. Round-Arse.

smirking_muse April 24 2009, 00:52:39 UTC

Thank you so much! I can definitely see Draco as the type to have many odd and fleeting obsessions. :)

kawanale April 24 2009, 09:42:55 UTC

i just noticed your avatar! whoa, that's a very grown-up draco! i kind of wish he had longer hair aka lucius, but it's pretty good there!

bk7brokemybrain April 24 2009, 13:49:13 UTC

Isn't he a beauty? Tom's face went through all kinds of contortions as he grew up, but he came out so handsome on the other side. I'm in love with all the PR shots for the Half-Blood Prince for Draco.

jamie2109 April 23 2009, 12:33:12 UTC

I really enjoyed reading this. It was funny seeing Harry all harassed and flustered and babbling overexcitedly, lol. Draco's monologue was amusing, too, with his obsession with coffee. I really also liked competent Ron - so many people write him as a bit of a blundering fool, so it was nice to see him in a more mature light.

Great entry for the team. :)

smirking_muse April 24 2009, 00:54:14 UTC

Thank you very much! I think Ron may seem a bit silly at times, but he's a pretty deep character. He's just a bit fun-loving and sometimes rash, so he comes off as less intelligent even though he's quite clever underneath it all. I'm very glad you enjoyed it! Go Team!

ashe_frost April 23 2009, 13:47:26 UTC

Hee! This is really cute and precious! I love mad as a hatter Draco and his coffee obsession and how Harry finds him endearing. I find it pretty endearing, too.

smirking_muse April 24 2009, 00:57:05 UTC

Thanks very much! Haha, I didn't think he was necessarily mad- just, sometimes clever people have odd thoughts and not necessarily super easy to follow progressions. Other people have them too (erm, well, I hope I'm not too crazy :P). I'm glad he was endearing though! Go Team!

Read My Mind joan_waterhouse April 23 2009, 15:02:22 UTC

Very cute indeed :)

Draco's thoughts are very amusing!
I love how it all leads up to: "Well, now I know you won't shove me away if I try this,"! ^_^

Re: Read My Mind smirking_muse April 24 2009, 00:58:34 UTC

Thanks so much for reading, hon! I'm glad you thought it was cute. Haha, well, he had a pretty good indicator about how he felt, so I figured it had to be coming... somehow. Hehe. Thanks again!

maggie2mw April 23 2009, 15:56:08 UTC

So cute! My face is hurting from smiling!

smirking_muse April 24 2009, 01:00:01 UTC

Thank you very, very much- I'm so glad it was successful, and I hope the smile wasn't too painful. ;) Can't ever have too much smiling, right?