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Caught Between the Windows and the World - Team Fanon

May 08, 2008 08:11

Title: Caught Between the Windows and the World.
Team: Team Fanon
Author: jamie2109
Prompt: Temperance
Wordcount: 16,950
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Light BDSM
Summary: His hour was rapidly becoming a cherished time of day and Draco felt free to think things he'd never imagined before. These things became a promise, a wish, and a desire.
Author's Note: Thanks ( Read more... )

prompt: temperance, nc-17, round i, fic, team fanon

Comments 27

chlorate May 8 2008, 17:58:35 UTC

Wow. That was such a beautifully emotional journey for Draco. I don't usually enjoy BDSM much, but the feelings that made Draco seek it out were so real that even though I had a hard time getting drawn in at first, by the end I felt almost as trembly and shaky as Draco did - that last scene was incredibly emotional, that he isn't angry, that he's just so happy, it really speaks to how far he was able to come. There was the sort of microcosmic, episodic breaking-down-and-putting-together-again that happened during each one of Draco's sessions with Guardian, but on a macrocosmic level you did this with Draco all the way through the story. I felt like I had gone through the emotional journey that Draco did, by the end. Very well done!

sassy_cissa May 8 2008, 21:10:31 UTC

Damn....

That was such an emotional ride. I absolutely adore Draco in this.

And this line... Oh, yes, this was his place. Right here, under his Harry, being made love to. .... absolute love!

Way to go, Team Fanon!!

absynthedrinker May 8 2008, 22:31:12 UTC

Wonderful! Thanks

snackbreak May 9 2008, 00:11:17 UTC

Loved the story... I really like BDSM fics in general, but only when they are more like this - about relationships and emotion - rather than about crazy!Harry likes to beat on so-and-so.

I have to admit that I wasn't certain Harry was the Guardian (although I guessed it was a possibility) until the very end, only because I could equally appreciate the story without that being the case. I grew to really like the Guardian as a separate person from Harry, so to reconcile those two characters was a little difficult for me, even if I half expected it.

Regardless, I really enjoyed this story and loved the way you presented Draco throughout.

aoifene May 9 2008, 04:17:39 UTC

I usually don't like BDSM fics AT ALL because I could never connect to it/understand it but you made it easy in this fic :D It's approached from an emotional, and dare I say, logical point of view that I really appreciate. I enjoyed Draco's emotional journey and how Harry was chasing after Draco. I have big soft spot for chasing! Harry and also how Draco was trying to keep it together after everything. The angst was made all better in the end which is nice but I'm glad it wasn't easy (coz I'm an angst hor lol) Thank you for such an enjoyable read!

GO TEAM FANON!

drgaellon May 12 2008, 19:50:45 UTC

This gets to the heart of what BDSM should be about... which too many fics don't get.