Subconscious - Team EWE

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Title: Subconscious
Team: EWE
Author: cryptaviscus
Prompt: The Moon
Wordcount: 10,172
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: mild swearing
Summary: Harry is sent to seek out a young Seer who has been confined to a mental institution. Could he handle all the mind games?
Author's Note: All characters from the Harry Potter Universe belong to J.K. Rowling and various publishers

Comments

[laila_rue]

Interesting career choice for Draco ;P
How I wish I could meet a psyche nurse as handsome as him. *sigh*

The story did a wonderful job of narrating, what it feels like to be in a mental institution, even if it's in a magical one.
I can't help but recall the days we had our duty in the psyche ward as well, that's how much I got caught up in the story. =P

Kudos to you mystery author!!! =D

[misscake]

This is a really interesting plot and your descriptions, especially of the experience in Jackie's mind, are wonderful. I just wish we'd been able to see more of the interactions between Harry and Draco in those weeks at St. Giles that led to their attraction to each other.

[shoeboxer4life]

ITA

[romaine24]

The idea of a Pscyh hospital like St. Gile's is brilliant. I loved the use of Cheering Charms and other magic used to make the patients feel better. The golden chain was clever too. Draco as a Pscyh-nurse made me smile. The trip into the young girl's thoughts was horrible. And, no, Draco, no sending psychopaths after Harry. :)

[ravenna_c_tan]

I loved the part where Harry is first under the influence of the Cheering Charms, how he's thinking about getting knitting needles for Molly, and how nice Draco's hair is... just a perfect little moment inside his head. :)

[daisy_chan]

I liked this, but I think you need to run it by another beta. There are a lot of tense and grammar issues.

[cloudicus]

Seconded the tense changes were really jarring for me and ruined what was otherwise a very good story.