Fic: Negotiations (PG15)

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Author: tweetiescueetie
Title: Negotiations
Pairing(s): Draco/Harry; Harry/OFC (past); Ron/Hermione; others
Rating: PG-15-ish
Summary: Harry Potter always had two left feet and when the Conference of Ministries is held at Hogwarts, he finds himself unable to escape the dancing. To his horror, the only one who can teach him is Draco Malfoy, the resident Potions

Comments

[pervyunitwins]

I loved it! I loved it ever so much. The dancing lessons and the banter. Oh the banter was the best part. There would be no Harry and Draco without the banter present, I am sure of it. You really out did yourself with this one. And the Tabby just came out of now where, but I loved her all the same. And I loved the end to pieces.

So basically what you should have gotten form the above was that I was highly pleased with your story and that I loved it.

[dragon_charmer]

I enjoyed this story so much - from the dancing lessons to the arguments, and the snark between Harry and Draco. The idea of doing negotiations like this is excellent. Your scheming headmistress made me smile and I loved how she played both boys so very well.

Oh, and the cat *g*

Thank you for taking part and putting a huge smile on my face.

[lttlelola]

this was very good, but honestly it disappointed me throughout the story i was execting them to get together at the dance then all of a sudden draocs confessing, getting punched and we go to four years later with them remembering events that we never read about. this is good but i think it would be better if we got to see the entire story and not the workings of an epilogue

[romaine24]

I'm glad they finally did get together in the epilogue and that Tabby was still around.

The dance instructions were entertaining and so was the Ball. I did want to bap both of them over the head a few times and especially Harry at the end. :)

Negotiations

[tsuj]

Firstly, I, too, was not expecting a punch to the face -- which was why I liked it!

There was a lot of humour which I liked.

"I was joking, Minerva," Harry tried, the sour taste of what could only be fear in the back of his mouth making him queasy. "Ha ha."
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  I swear, that woman is more persistent than a hungry Hippogriff."
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"when I say 'none of your business', in reality I mean 'none of your fucking business, you stupid git!'"

These were lovely:

Music, old and enchanting, floated out into the room and Harry swallowed, his mouth suddenly dry.
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Harry had realized that he missed Draco. Not Malfoy

These felt too ooc:

He did not really mind those games, two could play them after all,
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the scores of brats that passed through his classroom

I just can't picture Harry thinking "brats."

ANd your "The End" was brilliant!

Finite Incantatem