Fic: Look Again (PG13)

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Author: tiger_flame
Title: Look Again
Pairing(s): Draco/Harry, Remus/Sirius, slight Remus/Severus and Lily/James
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Without Voldemort to take away the things most special to him, Harry Potter is just a normal boy. Until his godfather is attacked and sent into a coma. Now Harry must figure out a way to keep Sirius’ money out of the Malfoy’

Comments

[starlollie]

That was really sad.

[abusing_sarcasm]

I really enjoyed this! Overall, I think it could have used a stronger beta (I found a few errors, but I'm a nitpicker), but I really loved how you created the story.

One thing I *didn't* like was the fact that more didn't happen with those flashes of Harry's "other" life that he sometimes dreamed. I thought that was the most fascinating part of your whole story. I would have loved to see that explored more deeply. I thought that was a great idea.

I liked how their relationship developed, too. I think the pace felt very natural, and I liked your characterizations. I thought it was an interesting choice to have James and Lily be kind of absentee, mirroring the real canon, despite the AU storyline.

Very nice job!

*hugs*

[tiger_flame]

*hugs* I can finaly reply to this! Yay!

Thank you so much for reading this! I was going to have more with the flashed of the 'other' life, but I ran out of time, i had to get TWO extensions in the first place!!

*hugs* I'm so glad you thought it was good. Thank you so much, you don't know what that means!!!

[maevemist]

I finally finished it. Better late than never I guess.

To be perfectly honest there are alot of missing parts that I still do not understand but then again if you had added all the missing moments and back story you would be writing it for years.

I liked that Draco supported Harry when no one else did (not really anyway) and I actually liked that Sanpe was helping Remus as best he could while remaining in character.

I fell bad that even in a Voldy free world Harry's life is still tragic.

[azamir]

that was so sad T_T.

Very moving, and so very sad, how Harry is left alone by his family in the end, though Draco is by his side. and I really pity Remus, losing his love...

can I get a sequel where Harry and Draco continue their life and hw Harry gets over his loss?

This was so intense on the emotionas.. I want more!

[romaine24]

That was really an interesting AU. Especially with Harry still having a rough life even though Voldemort wasn't around and his parents were. *sniffle* about Sirius.

Ah, Narcissa, as the evil witch was a good choice. ;)

I really did like Draco being so protective.