Fic: Unspoken (PG)

Oct 03, 2008 21:11

Author: nahara
Title: Unspoken
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: PG
Summary: When Draco asks Harry to become the Headmaster of Hogwarts and save the school from falling to ruin, little does he know that Harry will do more than save Hogwarts.
Warnings (if any): N/A
Total word count: 6,123

Original prompt request number: 137

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dm_p October 4 2008, 16:40:12 UTC
This was lovely. Just...there was a sort of quietness to the whole thing, that they just let themselves be led into the relationship. It was nice, and sort of like a warm cup of cider.

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nahara October 17 2008, 11:01:33 UTC
Sorry for such a tardy reply after the big reveal.

I'm glad you liked this story! I just loved your prompt so much I couldn't let it pass. :D I also rather liked your analogy of my story being like 'a warm cup of cider.' That's a very nice thing to hear.

~ nahara

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pervyunitwins October 5 2008, 03:16:44 UTC
That was lovely! And ever so melancholy. I felt like crying at the end. It really was rather nice. I did like the beautiful friendship that they had formed.

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nahara October 17 2008, 11:04:05 UTC
Sorry for this tardy reply after the big reveal.

I'm glad you liked my story so much and had the time to review. It's always nice to know when someone reads your work and really engages with it emotionally - as you seem to have done.

Thanks again,

~ nahara

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phoenixacid October 5 2008, 03:31:36 UTC
Lovely H/D-friendship fic. I like how they've mellowed down and I thought the ending was very sweet.

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nahara October 17 2008, 11:06:04 UTC
Sorry such a tardy reply after the big reveal.

A quick thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the story.

~ nahara

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sesheta_66 October 5 2008, 06:40:19 UTC
I liked the concept you carried forward from canon - that the castle/school would simply refuse a Headmaster or Headmistress that wasn't worthy of the job. No matter that the Ministry was able to influence the appointment of the Deputy Headmistress, the school could refuse a simpering fool like you showed in this story.

I liked the gradual friendship you built up in this story ... the companionship, the comfortable silences, the support of two men for each other, and the joy their friendship brought.

The ending was sad, though ... imagining that Harry will never again find true happiness now that Ginny is gone. *sniffs and snuggles Harry*

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nahara October 17 2008, 11:19:22 UTC
Sorry for this tardy reply so long after the big reveal!

Thank you very much for your comments. I'm glad you liked the concept of the story and the gradual companionship between H/D. I'm sorry if the ending was too sad… I couldn’t really see it ending any other way.

*snuggles Harry too*

Thanks again,

~ nahara

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sesheta_66 October 17 2008, 11:41:52 UTC
No need to be sorry about the ending. The fact that it saddened me showed that you accomplished what you set out to do. Good job!

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kawanale October 5 2008, 09:30:03 UTC
While this was a nice story to read, I don't consider it a true H/D story so not sure what to make of it.

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nahara October 17 2008, 11:21:45 UTC
Sorry for such a tardy reply so long after the big reveal!

Thank very much for reading. I'm sorry you didn't consider it a true H/D. I would respectfully disagree on that point, but I'm glad you thought it was nice.

Thanks again,

~ nahara

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