Fic: One-Winged Angels

Sep 11, 2008 19:33

Author: _pinkchocolate
Title: One-Winged Angels
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17
Summary: As punishment for his crimes during the war, Draco must live in an isolated cabin in the Forbidden Forest until he can rescue fifty unicorn foals.
Warnings (if any): Unicorns, some language, boy smexin’, and a questionable, non-cracky take on the prompt.
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jamie2109 September 11 2008, 23:21:48 UTC
I admit when I first read the summary was a bit wary - it was such an unusual punishment it felt unreal, but the way you wrote Draco learning and growing and the heartwarming way in which he came to terms with his guilt and discovered just how determined he could be was wonderful. The beautiful descriptive passages were very visual and will leave me with gorgeous glimpses of this story for a long time to come. Thank you so much for being part of this fest!

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 06:00:12 UTC
Thank you very much! :) This is the first time I've made an effort to be descriptive in my writing; I'm glad it paid off.

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eanelinea77 September 11 2008, 23:25:38 UTC
Nice premise with the unicorns and Draco still being a virgin. Liked how Harry was the one to go to them to give them food and letters and such. Nice story. Good job.

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 06:00:30 UTC
Thank you! It was the only way I could get Harry in there, lol.

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a_queen_bee September 12 2008, 00:45:57 UTC
OMG! i can't believe anyone would pick-up my prompt *do crazy happy dance* Don't worry about twisting or turning my prompt, i love surprise <3(oh and angst is my guilty pleasure ^_^;;) I just read the summary and it seems interesting for me, i'll be back with more response after i finished reding this.

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 06:00:56 UTC
Your plot jumped out at me from the start; it was my second choice, so I was happy that I got it :)

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beatnikspinster September 12 2008, 02:09:12 UTC
I enjoyed the pacing and humor of this story.

"...unicorns will now only answer to the purest of witches and wizards."
"What's that got to do with me?"

HaHaHa! That line floored me.

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 06:01:13 UTC
Thank you! XD I'm glad you liked it.

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_pinkchocolate October 22 2008, 06:01:53 UTC
Thank you so much! The unicorns gave me so much hell; I'm glad they're done with and I (hopefully) never have to deal with them again.

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