Happy H/D Holidays florahart - Part 2/2

[hd_hols]

Author: shadowclub
Recipient: florahart
Title:Opaque - Part 2/2

Comments

[lackofmendacity]

Heheh, what an amusing fic. :)

I really liked how, despite the seriousness of Harry's situation and Draco's plans, you've scattered hilarious one-liners. I feel almost ashamed at laughing at Harry's plight, but your use of language had me constantly grinning. *looks shifty*

Draco's two attempts at not letting Harry know what he was up to were especially cute and funny. I really enjoyed this fic, so thanks for the fantastic read. *hugs*

[shadowclub]

Thank you! I tried to write a serious fic, but it came out a little skewed considering most of what I write is humor!

[shadowclub]

Thanks for reviewing!

I haven't seen Prison Break so I can't really be sure:)

[luci0logy]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I shall always think of Snape as a bat. The conversations in Harry's head were most amusing, as was Draco's denial about his reaction to Harry. I didn't see the polyjuice coming, I was thinking 'where've they got alchohol from?'

[shadowclub]

Thank you! It's prison, don't they make alcohol in the toilets or something?!

[jamie2109]

I loved this. It's littered with wonderfully funny lines which tempered the harshness of the prison and the way Harry was treated. The polyjuice really surprised me, just didn't see that one coming, lol. A really thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you for being part of the fest! ♥

[shadowclub]

Yeah, Harry kind of got the short stick in this one, but it worked out in the end!

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[kestrelsparhawk]

I thought of all sorts of possibilities -- the potion Snape advises will make Draco appear dead, they need to kidnap Potter too -- oh, snap! It's because Harry has a chance of leaving. Nice twist, though I found that very sad.

Loved the one-liners, like Malfoy thinking he better call Potter Harry now that his tongue is in Harry's mouth...and having had a major laryngitis where I literally could make no sound for nearly two weeks, I relate so much to Harry's powerlessness. Loathe Umbridge, and I can really see her doing that.

I did wonder what her position was -- is she the new minister? How come she's got control of the Wizengamot?

Thank you for a nice, complex story.

[shadowclub]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.

In this particular scenerio I imagined Umbridge to simply be the last person standing. After the chaos with Voldemort she was kind of forgotten about (being neither a friend of the light side or the dark) and seized her opportunity. She's kind of this interim chief while the Ministry is fixing itself.