HAPPY H/D HOLIDAYS, DYSONRULES!

[hd_hols]

Author: oldenuf2nb
Recipient: dysonrules
Title: In Plain Sight
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Ron/Hermione
Summary: Draco Malfoy had stopped believing his wishes would be granted long ago. He could perhaps be forgiven for being startled, then, when one of them came true
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and

Comments

[ellecc]

Totally loved it. Loved the tone of it--a little dark, not too sappy or anything. Really loved the story idea, too, of Hogwarts being this Thing that knows stuff. It's perfect. Harry and Draco were the right amount of agonized without being overwrought. Really, really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for letting your plot rabbit come out to play :)

[sajmalfoy13]

I really liked this. :) The part with Harry and Draco in the potions lab with Harry's thigh between Draco's = YUM!!!!!!! Very nicely done :D

[sw_davenport]

You've done a great job with the characterization here, by which I mean the boys match my personal conception of them. Perceptive!Hermione was a pleasure to read, and I'm glad she sorted Ravenclaw...always thought that would have been more appropriate, even though she's obviously brave. Love the castle protecting itself against narrow-mindedness. That was a well-realized plot conception and it meshed with canon well, which is always appreciated. Really just an all-around good piece. Thanks for posting!

[ariannagray]

What an intersting concept, I really like the idea of Hogwarts defending itself. Also flirty!Draco while high on painkillers = win! Great story!

Lovely

[danimati]

I really really enjoyed this story. As @aline_daryen said, sometimes it almost felt as if I was reading the books - the way you so perfectly incorporated the dynamics among Harry, Ron and Hermione. In most fics they are mostly supporting chars, but you managed to really put them in the story in a way that was both convincing and interesting.

I also loved the sex with clothes scene - I actually think that that was one of the sexiest scenes I've ever read when there was nothing "really" happening and it was all so hot. I also loved the way you described their reactions and how beautifully and kind Draco was with Harry. He really sounded liked as a non-experience teenager, eager and shy.

Ok, enough, I supposed you have noted I really enjoyed reading it (I was thinking about it the whole day while I was at work and looking forward to be able to come home and read!) Thank you for sharing it with us!

Re: Lovely

[shantismurf]

Yes I felt that too...that I was reading the books again with Harry's crusading and Hermine's research and the way it all came together. Genius!