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HAPPY H/D HOLIDAYS, DYSONRULES!

Dec 07, 2011 00:00

Author: oldenuf2nb
Recipient: dysonrules
Title: In Plain Sight
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Ron/Hermione
Summary: Draco Malfoy had stopped believing his wishes would be granted long ago. He could perhaps be forgiven for being startled, then, when one of them came true
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and ( Read more... )

ewe, [long/chaptered fic], round: winter 2011, [fic], rated: r

Comments 98

dysonrules December 7 2011, 05:09:05 UTC

SQUEEEE! I finally get to read it! WOOOOT!!! I'll be back with actualfax review tomorrow. I don't think I can swing 37k tonight. XD

*GLOMPS*

joemoe93 December 7 2011, 06:57:23 UTC

SO. GOOD. paojsdfadjfaioiipqapda
1) You quite nicely avoided problems with sexism that slash fic can slip into sometimes. Much appreciated.
2) I loved the Draco/Harry dynamics. They were funny, adorable, heart-breaking, and beautiful in all the appropriate places. Guh.
3) The writing of Ron was brilliant, I loved the Golden Trio dynamics, druggedandflirty!Draco was cute as fuck, I always appreciate an observant Hermione, the sexy scenes were indeed very sexy, I could go on. Brilliant piece. ^_^

dysonrules December 7 2011, 15:17:10 UTC

*TWIRLS YOU* Thank you so muuuuuuch! That was LOVELY! Even though you hurt my PRECIOUS PANSY! *wails* I've always loved Hogwarts' partial sentience and you did a great job giving it a motive for Draco's disappearance. I never get tired of Harry following him (Malfoy stalking FTW!). The snogging and clothed sex was FABULOUS (my fav!) and I was so happy to have the school back to normal by the end. It was crushing when all of the snakey bits were just gone. :(((((

Excellently done, oh "mystery author". :D *loves*

shakka1 December 7 2011, 16:22:40 UTC

Wonderful! Hogwarts, 8th-year, mystery and schoolboy crushes and frottage... all my favourite things in one fic. I enjoyed it very, very much!!

aline_daryen December 7 2011, 17:45:19 UTC

This is gorgeous! Absolutely brilliant! Fading Away is great and exceedingly lovely, but apparently it never hurts to explore a good idea some more. I loved the plot and the way it was executed, it truly read like a canon eighth book sometimes. But apart from that, there's a sense of intimacy and total balance between Harry and Draco that took my breath away. You managed to evade almost all H/D stereotypes, making Harry bold and direct, yet still innocent and gentle in wooing Draco, and Draco's snarkiness tempered by spontaneity and vulnerability. Truly, this was an afternoon well spent.