Author:
enchanted_jae Recipient:
jordanneleighTitle: Peeping Tom
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Summary: Harry has been assigned to keep surveillance on Draco Malfoy, the person whom he has secretly been dating.
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
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I really like the way Draco reacted when he realized what had happened. He was angry, yes, but he was able to keep himself contained, tell Harry to do what he needed to do. I hate it when some writers have him fly into rages or hysterics. I thought his reaction was very mature, very in-character, very Malfoy. I liked the lack of unnecessary angst.
I rather liked the inclusion of the condom. Most of the time writers write fantasy sex without condoms and that's utterly delightful, but the condom made it feel more real, like it could actually happen to me *blush*.
I also liked that Harry's animagus form was useful, instead of CAT!HARRYOMGYAY.
Good job.
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