HAPPY H/D HOLIDAYS, JORDANNELEIGH!

Dec 09, 2009 00:07

Author: enchanted_jae
Recipient: jordanneleigh
Title: Peeping Tom
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Summary: Harry has been assigned to keep surveillance on Draco Malfoy, the person whom he has secretly been dating.
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
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ewe, round: winter 2009, [fic], rated: r

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lucianwolf December 9 2009, 06:01:55 UTC
I liked your reasoning as to why Harry stayed on the case. Conflict of interest, but this way Draco had even a chance of being innocent.

I really like the way Draco reacted when he realized what had happened. He was angry, yes, but he was able to keep himself contained, tell Harry to do what he needed to do. I hate it when some writers have him fly into rages or hysterics. I thought his reaction was very mature, very in-character, very Malfoy. I liked the lack of unnecessary angst.

I rather liked the inclusion of the condom. Most of the time writers write fantasy sex without condoms and that's utterly delightful, but the condom made it feel more real, like it could actually happen to me *blush*.

I also liked that Harry's animagus form was useful, instead of CAT!HARRYOMGYAY.

Good job.

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enchanted_jae January 18 2010, 08:44:30 UTC
I'm pleased you liked this. Thanks for pointing out what your favorite parts. I like to write post-Hogwarts stuff, in which both Harry and Draco are more mature and responsible, thus the condom use. Hee!

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eanelinea77 December 9 2009, 06:03:09 UTC
Very cute.

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enchanted_jae January 18 2010, 08:44:40 UTC
Thank you!

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yellownovella December 9 2009, 06:07:06 UTC
ah, nothing like a good Animagus fic! I really enjoyed it, especially the smexin :D

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enchanted_jae January 18 2010, 08:45:08 UTC
I love Animagus!fics, too. And, I have a soft spot for cat!Animagus.

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remuslives23 December 9 2009, 07:15:12 UTC
I love this! It's cute and funny and HOT all at the same time. And I'm fairly sure I know who wrote it (although I'm ususually wrong).

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enchanted_jae January 18 2010, 08:45:37 UTC
I'm pleased you enjoyed it!

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okydoky December 9 2009, 08:57:47 UTC
Heee this was so cute! Love it! :D

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enchanted_jae January 18 2010, 08:45:46 UTC
Thanks so much!

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