HAPPY H/D HOLIDAYS, FROGGIE!

Dec 02, 2009 00:00

Author: marguerite_26
Recipient: froggie
Title: Savage
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Summary: In a post-war world that lives in fear and ignorance of werewolves, Draco Malfoy has taken every step to keep his condition hidden. When the delicate balance of his life shatters in a single moment, it is Harry Potter alone standing in his defence.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All ( Read more... )

ewe, round: winter 2009, rated: nc-17, [fic]

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literaryspell December 2 2009, 15:18:48 UTC
This was so hot! I loved this story. And I love that you told it from Draco's POV; it would have been easy to switch to Harry's to explain how he felt, but I liked not knowing for sure.

The palm-licking, neck-sniffing, exerting dominance over a ten year old were all amazing! Such a sexy, kinky story, and yet completely in character. Harry's saving people thing came out in full force, and I found Draco's characterisation to be totally believable. Very, very well written, a complete joy to read. Great work.

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marguerite_26 January 21 2010, 18:32:37 UTC
Woot!!! I'm so thrilled you liked the licking and sniffing and such. It was a blast to write. :D

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

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thisgirl_is December 2 2009, 15:31:45 UTC
Oh my! I do love a good werewolf fic.

I love the way you built such an atmosphere that was so fearful, and so poised to switch to anger. I really felt for Draco, having to do so much to hold on to a normal life, and then having it torn down around him.

Harry was marvellous - just a little too determined for his own good.

The twist with Crawford suddenly coming to the fore was great.

Wonderful story.

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marguerite_26 January 21 2010, 18:33:00 UTC
What an amazing comment. Thank you.

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marquisedesrats December 2 2009, 16:12:00 UTC
There isn't enough werewolf!Draco in the world, and good one at that !

But your fic is a total winner. I just love how Draco moves in this fic, I'm just dying to have the visual.

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marguerite_26 January 21 2010, 18:33:36 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate this comment. :D

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tray_la_la December 2 2009, 16:34:37 UTC
this was fucking awesome! (yes, the profanity was necessary! :P) i have never read werewolf!fic outside of the marauders era, because i never thought i could buy into it in h/d, but you have swiftly proved me wrong. i was completely gripped by the end of the second passage, leaning forward in my chair and holding my breath to see if draco would make it in time, and that intensity didn't wane throughout the rest of it - the runs were especially effective in keeping it up. the animalistic side of draco's behavior was described so vividly and my pulse raced whenever his wolf instinct came out. i love possessiveness, and the pack leader mentality made it all the hotter. his dynamic with other lycanthropes was riveting, especially with teddy, and seeing him battle between his human rationale and animal urges was so engrossing. the smex was ohmyfuckinggod so incredibly hot! a willing harry is just fjkdlsjf! and i loved the small elements of fear you introduced - draco's dream, his mentions of fenrir - so that draco never seemed harmless in ( ... )

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tray_la_la December 2 2009, 16:39:07 UTC
one more thing! i loved how you kept their out of the bedroom dynamic a little uneasy and uncertain. they didn't fall in love instantly or anything and the narrative wouldn't have supported that, but it was clear how drawn they were to each other in their own ways and that magnetism got to take center stage. wonderful choice, imo.

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marguerite_26 January 21 2010, 18:35:41 UTC
More glomping!!!!

*glomps*

Thank you!

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marguerite_26 January 21 2010, 18:34:20 UTC
This comment is sooo amazing. GAH!!! Totally made my day, that day and then again today. *preens*

That you so so much, tray! *glomps you*

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being_here December 2 2009, 18:18:17 UTC
That was amazing! I loved it. I love the journey they make together, and the pack instinct, and the dialogue.

I want to read more!

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marguerite_26 January 21 2010, 18:36:35 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate your comment. :D

I want to read more!
:D maybe someday!

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