Happy H/D Holidays, florahart!

Dec 27, 2008 11:55

Author: snottygrrl
Recipient: florahart
Title: Twelve Seemingly Insignificant Moments That Change Everything
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Harry/Ginny, implied Draco/Astoria, implied Ron/Hermione, Scorpius/Rose
Summary: Simple moments that might seem inconsequential are the building blocks of a greater whole.
Rating: Hard R
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein ( Read more... )

epilogue compliant, [fic], round: winter 2008, rated: r

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salviag December 27 2008, 17:11:39 UTC
How lovely! I'm glad you avoided the evil!Ginny, but the best part was the slow development of the relationship between Harry and Draco. And the end is just sweet!

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snottygrrl January 17 2009, 02:30:49 UTC
thanks so much, am v. v. glad you appreciated non-evil!ginny and that the story worked for you ♥

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auselysium December 27 2008, 17:36:49 UTC
So perfect! And so totally believable too!

For some reason this line really broke my heart:
That others have probably refused to be treated by him and yet he's still trying. I can see the look of determination on Draco's face as he tries to do what is right.

Just wonderful!! Thank you!!

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snottygrrl January 17 2009, 02:38:22 UTC
thanks heaps, am v. pleased the story spoke to you. i appreciate you letting me know.

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florahart December 27 2008, 18:11:26 UTC
Aw!

I love that Harry manages, in that first St. Mungo's scene, to refrain from refusing. Even though his reason at the time is more so as not to do what Malfoy expects, it's still important (obviously).

I like that Ginny just accepts and includes, rather than freaking out, that all the kids obviously do (and are a little pushy), that the whole Burrow prods them into the kissing, that it takes ages to get there for them, but then unfolds quickly, lots of things.

Thank you, Santa!

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snottygrrl January 17 2009, 02:45:51 UTC
i was really thrilled to be able to write for you and your prompts/kinks brought many ideas to mind, despite all that i had a devil of a time with this (and somehow managed to get it past innumerable betas with some atrocious errors. sorry about that). was satisfied with the result (though not overly excited because i am afraid it's not my best writing) and i hope you liked it okay ♥

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florahart January 17 2009, 02:51:20 UTC
I thought it was pretty entertaining that in many ways the story I received and the story I wrote were along similar lines--I mean, a series of scenes, non-bitch!Ginny, the kids having a lot to do with getting them together...

In part, of course, that's because I said I both wanted and would write some of those things (heh), but I still found it entertaining. :D

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alisanne December 27 2008, 18:14:05 UTC
Wonderful, WONDERFUL story!
I loved your Ginny, the slow shift in Harry and Draco's relationship was perfect, and you know you've done it right when even the Weasleys are conspiring to get them together. :)
My heart broke for Draco a few times, and I LOVED the totally deserved dressing down the trainee healer got.
And what a great last line! Beautiful work.

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snottygrrl January 17 2009, 02:47:11 UTC
thanks heaps, hon. am so pleased you enjoyed this. i really appreciate you taking the time to tell me why you did ♥

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rickey_a December 27 2008, 18:48:37 UTC
What a lovely glimses of and adrift through Harry's very eventful life. Nice twist on Ginny. This is one of those life happens while you aren't looking type of things, or perhaps you are looking.

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snottygrrl January 17 2009, 02:49:41 UTC
glad you mostly enjoyed this. thanks for the lovely comment and the rec ♥

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