changeling and awakening

Feb 16, 2007 23:56

author: snottygrrl
word count: 100 (x 2)

changeling, R )

author: snottygrrl, challenge: flashback

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empathic_siren February 16 2007, 13:09:13 UTC
These are wonderful! I especially like Awakening. The struggle, of course, is to tell a "complete" story within the 100 words. I've never been able to do it, but I think you do it very well, again, using Awakening as an example. Fantastic!

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snottygrrl February 16 2007, 23:16:30 UTC
[*blushes*]

thanks hon. i'm v. pleased you liked these two ditties. [*snugs you*]

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kcstories February 16 2007, 14:09:03 UTC
Very nice. I love the second one especially.

Harry often thought that metaphorical was usually much worse than absolute.

Wonderful line. ♥

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snottygrrl February 16 2007, 23:18:56 UTC
thanks heaps. am feeling a little ruaty, so am v. happy at least some of you enjoyed these. ♥

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earth_magic February 16 2007, 20:39:19 UTC
These are both so good. You've managed to convey Harry's horror in 'changling' and the meaninglessness of paper-shuffling in 'awakening'. empathic_siren is right - the struggle IS to tell a compelte story in 100 words, something you do so well.

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snottygrrl February 16 2007, 23:21:17 UTC
thanks, lovey. i've had a heck of a time this month getting anything out the pen, so am doubly pleased you liked these. [*clings*]

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luci0logy February 16 2007, 22:17:06 UTC
You must protect…Fae….Draco's name…no one can know."

Ooooh, I liked the dark tones of the first one but this line makes me think I've missed an earlier drabble or there's some mystery you're going to delve into later. What's to know? Who's Fae?

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snottygrrl February 16 2007, 23:26:14 UTC
there is no earlier, but yes, changeling comes from a verse i've got in my head, but have not written on. and likely you will see a few more touching on it as well.

thanks, hon. i'm glad i can still manage to get some words on page that generate some interest. ♥

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luci0logy February 17 2007, 00:08:03 UTC
i'm glad i can still manage to get some words on page that generate some interest

Never doubt that! *hugs tight*

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snottygrrl February 17 2007, 01:02:59 UTC

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dihall February 17 2007, 00:10:16 UTC
You tease...we love them both and really want more, more, more!!! ((hugs))

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snottygrrl February 17 2007, 00:55:06 UTC
there will definitely be more drabbles.

there is likely to be more from the fae universe...

am pleased you liked them. [*cuddles*] ♥

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