These are wonderful! I especially like Awakening. The struggle, of course, is to tell a "complete" story within the 100 words. I've never been able to do it, but I think you do it very well, again, using Awakening as an example. Fantastic!
These are both so good. You've managed to convey Harry's horror in 'changling' and the meaninglessness of paper-shuffling in 'awakening'. empathic_siren is right - the struggle IS to tell a compelte story in 100 words, something you do so well.
You must protect…Fae….Draco's name…no one can know."
Ooooh, I liked the dark tones of the first one but this line makes me think I've missed an earlier drabble or there's some mystery you're going to delve into later. What's to know? Who's Fae?
there is no earlier, but yes, changeling comes from a verse i've got in my head, but have not written on. and likely you will see a few more touching on it as well.
thanks, hon. i'm glad i can still manage to get some words on page that generate some interest. ♥
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thanks hon. i'm v. pleased you liked these two ditties. [*snugs you*]
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Harry often thought that metaphorical was usually much worse than absolute.
Wonderful line. ♥
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Ooooh, I liked the dark tones of the first one but this line makes me think I've missed an earlier drabble or there's some mystery you're going to delve into later. What's to know? Who's Fae?
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thanks, hon. i'm glad i can still manage to get some words on page that generate some interest. ♥
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Never doubt that! *hugs tight*
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there is likely to be more from the fae universe...
am pleased you liked them. [*cuddles*] ♥
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