Comments | hazelhawthorne: Desire

hazelhawthorne

Desire

Apr 13, 2004 23:53

A poem, free form, about the nature of lust and attraction.

( Shoulders forward, you slouch through the office.
Pants droop low on your hips, taunting gravity and tempting me.
How, I wonder, can I be attracted to someone so young?
Someone who dresses like a hip-hop video?
But I am.
I find you compelling. )

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hazelhawthorne April 14 2004, 13:24:40 UTC

Once you have cooled down, I would love some feedback.
Is there anything that stands out as great, or horrid?

Is it hot in here, or is it just me... arinnamichele April 14 2004, 12:47:09 UTC

As they say in Georgia: "Why Miss Hazel, y'all are givin' me the vapors!" ( as I fan myself coquettishly). Anyway -WOW! You have missed your calling, My Dear - the genre of Erotica is calling your name...I have to go hose myself down now....excuse me...

Re: Is it hot in here, or is it just me... hazelhawthorne April 14 2004, 13:22:42 UTC

I'd like to think I am listening to that calling as we speak.

Did you catch Elemental, the poem I wrote for April first? I think I may have sent it to you as an email, but if I didn't, I think you would enjoy.

I have been loving the poem-a-day that has been my April so far, but I have fallen woefully behind on my fics. I have a thousand word story due for the poly ficathon on May 1st that I haven't even looked at, and at least three other stories on the back burner that need to be finished. And now faire is starting, so I will have to write my poems on paper and post those for the weekends on Mondays.

Have I mentioned that I love smut?

I love you too.

Hope you enjoyed your hosing. *grin*

Re: Is it hot in here, or is it just me... arinnamichele April 15 2004, 02:25:22 UTC

PS - Smut is SUCH a great word! Smut,smut,smut - yay smut! Give me lots more smut,Miss Haze, if you please ...

faerielenore April 14 2004, 21:50:23 UTC

woah dude!! is that about Doug!?!?

hazelhawthorne April 14 2004, 23:34:52 UTC

SSSSHHHHH!

vegetariansushi April 14 2004, 22:43:14 UTC

Chips,dips, chains and whips arinnamichele April 14 2004, 23:30:58 UTC

I did, in fact enjoy my hosing ( which I shall describe to you later, darling *wink*). But it would have been much more fun if you were there! I can hardly read it again, it's so steamy (some of us have to sleep tonight, dammit!)There are so many great lines in this piece; 'would you allow me to map your body by taste' stands out. It's just very well written, start to finish. It needs to be published, seriously. There are many anthologies of erotica out there that would welcome this. Well done, Darling!

Lustfully yours, Arinna