[FF7] Pathfinder - Chapter 5
Rating: PG-13 - Status: Incomplete - Warnings: some violence
Characters: Rufus, Tseng, Veld, Vincent, Reno
Timeline: FF7, alternative universe.
Summary: [AU] Sierra, they called him. And Tseng had been appalled and embarrassed to find that their vaunted Junon informant was just a kid... Rufus Shinra, severed from the
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What do you mean, stilted? This read wonderfully. I love how their dialogue flowed.
This is brilliant. I can't wait to see where it leads - both in plot and with Sierra's over-friendly shoulder groping. ::leer.::
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It's STILTED. The only reason why you don't notice is that your worldview is already warped.
Yes, Sierra has wonderful hands. *leer back*
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Plus, I like your descriptions of Aurum. What with his razor sharp million gil smiles 8D. He's so vain, and his name is cool, too.
The part with Tseng and Rufus goes completely without saying~ But the green eyes thing had me thinking it was Reno for a moment I'm still delusional, I swear ♥ sadlfjklfdlsjdfk
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That's gotta be a lie, because my Vincent is based off Chelsey's (from Purg). XD I admit, interacting with him over the last two months really helped.
He's a Rufus. They're all vain.
*grin*
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There are so many fan-frigging-tastic things going on in this, and I hope to GOD I survive long enough to see how it all ends. :) Thank you SO much for the update!
I hope Rufus gets to off Aurum, and that DNation transfers his loyalties by smell... :) Thank you!!
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*laugh* Oh dear. Did I make poor Aurum that unlikeable?
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Just like all the other chapters, this one is equally utter love. =]
Can't wait for another of Aurum and Rufus showdown. xD (Aurum, watch your back, hell-bent-for-revenge!rufus in any AU ain't one to be messed with. xD)
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:D
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