Oooh, the end, err, the second half was so exciting. ..But the TBC is so evil. Damn you, cliffy-
Most importantly, though: So nice to see you're back! :D/break
Well, shit indeed. ..And I'm at a loss of words somehow XD Everything happened so fast again, despite the chap-length (though I had the time for a brief yayRude! Couldn't resist). Movie-like, just like the slapstick Soldier-style *shot* Reminds me of the end of chap9, lawl. Ah, and here's the mandatory TSENG! Soo. Am I done? aaw, Tseng. vanished. Ah, no. First thought was that Cloud's too nosey for his own good and Poor. Door. so the sympathy shifted. *pets door* Then shifted again, when sword met throat. Was that on purpose or pure coincidence? *g* But then again, Ruf's storytelling's always worth it. And it should explain some things, right... It does.
But. My brain fails and I just vaguely remember what happened before... I'll reread again. XD And both chapters of Edge that I missed. Why am I not surprised *sleeps ta gain energy* See ya!^_^ 'loss of words', yeah,
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I, uh, well. Yes. Have been busy. And Edge eats my brain.
Sometimes I think this fic moves too fast, and there just isn't enough detail D:.
I'm a great fan of the concept that there really is no right and wrong. *grin* But that was at least partially meant as a bit of comic relief before the explosions started up again.
Nooo. Detail's cool, just think that - in an action-scene - less is more (uh, does that saying work in English?^_^'). And since I'm rereading it in one go: The story has a pretty neat pace and detail! :D IMHO of course XD *coughs*
And it didn't involve Ren or Rude. So cool^_^ Now.. break's over *reads on*
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man, you just have to update soon!!! Can't leave us hangin' like that!!!
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I'll try my best! ♥
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Another wonderful chapter. I am developing an even stronger hatred for cliffhangers thanks to y - I never switched accounts, damnit.
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Weeeeeell.
...Wellyes. This one counts as a very bad cliffhanger 8D. Sorry!
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Love the blurb where he falls asleep right away.
And I especially like where Rufus couldn't hear Rude. Was that because of shell shock or was Rude just being quiet?
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A bit of both. He was definitely deafened by the blast, but Rude has a way of not saying anything.
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Wait, that was semi-dramatic. I cried.
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O.O...wow...
~leaf~
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Oooh, the end, err, the second half was so exciting. ..But the TBC is so evil. Damn you, cliffy-
Most importantly, though: So nice to see you're back! :D/break
Well, shit indeed. ..And I'm at a loss of words somehow XD Everything happened so fast again, despite the chap-length (though I had the time for a brief yayRude! Couldn't resist). Movie-like, just like the slapstick Soldier-style *shot* Reminds me of the end of chap9, lawl. Ah, and here's the mandatory TSENG! Soo. Am I done? aaw, Tseng. vanished.
Ah, no. First thought was that Cloud's too nosey for his own good and Poor. Door. so the sympathy shifted. *pets door* Then shifted again, when sword met throat. Was that on purpose or pure coincidence? *g* But then again, Ruf's storytelling's always worth it. And it should explain some things, right... It does.
But. My brain fails and I just vaguely remember what happened before... I'll reread again. XD And both chapters of Edge that I missed. Why am I not surprised *sleeps ta gain energy* See ya!^_^ 'loss of words', yeah, ( ... )
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I, uh, well. Yes. Have been busy. And Edge eats my brain.
Sometimes I think this fic moves too fast, and there just isn't enough detail D:.
I'm a great fan of the concept that there really is no right and wrong. *grin* But that was at least partially meant as a bit of comic relief before the explosions started up again.
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Nooo. Detail's cool, just think that - in an action-scene - less is more (uh, does that saying work in English?^_^'). And since I'm rereading it in one go: The story has a pretty neat pace and detail! :D IMHO of course XD *coughs*
And it didn't involve Ren or Rude. So cool^_^ Now.. break's over *reads on*
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Not involving Reno or Rude - is that a good thing or a bad thing? ^_~
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