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hazelator

[FF7] Silver in Autumn

Oct 17, 2006 16:29

[FF7] Silver in Autumn
Rating: PG

Time-frame: pre-BC, but contains no spoilers.

Tseng/Reno - prompt #1: Death, prompt #2: Leaves
For celes_grant and liriaen

Word count: 1,875 - One shot, complete.

Summary: This wasn’t their first mission. Far from it. Tseng brings a newly minted Turk on a run. And isn’t impressed ( Read more... )

tseng/reno, ff7, one shot, reno, tseng, before crisis

Comments 20

celes_grant October 17 2006, 08:46:47 UTC

Awesome does not descriiiiiibe! Oh, wow it like works!! Reno's descriptions, reactions, Tseng's deduction and just...

Well, every Turk loves a mission ^_^ Oh wow... I mean it seemed a bit rushed, but it might be because I was so very caught up in the moment and am I FANGIRLING HERE? Sorry I'm just so wound up and excited and just OMG.

*calms* I wonder what they were trying to purge, there......? What secrets? Ah so wonderfully left open xD

elvaron October 18 2006, 06:51:40 UTC

It is rushed. I could come up with all kinds of excuses, but mostly it just boils down to the fact that I wrote it in a hurry and didn't want to fill in the details. XD

Secrets... well, industrial-type secrets. Rival company with rival products that Shinra is forcefully removing from the market. You'll see more of this in Empire, because I am unoriginal. ^^

celes_grant October 18 2006, 08:27:54 UTC

wait... wait you're tying this in with other stories? Because .... because whoa....... talk about reason for jealousy for Rufus and AHAHAHAHAHAHA

yukie1013 October 17 2006, 10:17:31 UTC

Wow. That's just wow. I love your reno daerly and I can see his dance in my mind's eye and eeee.

elvaron October 18 2006, 06:53:31 UTC

:D

Reno's .. I don't know. I wanted to call this 'Dance of the Fig Leaves' XDDDDDD

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elvaron October 17 2006, 15:34:59 UTC

Absolutely! :D

I'm thrilled that you like it. Totally. I was kinda worried that it doesn't quite have the turn of language that the others do (well, it can't be helped; it is an action piece, and those tend to be less poetic).

abby_sarajane October 17 2006, 11:34:46 UTC

Squee. Wriggle. Yessssssss. Your imagry never fails to utterly impress me. The way you add detail and use it and it's just brilliant. I love. I love.

elvaron October 18 2006, 06:55:57 UTC

By the way, you're welcomed to request a fic if you want over here

abby_sarajane October 18 2006, 12:18:25 UTC

Eee! :: runs off to examine, wriggling::

sister_coyote October 17 2006, 15:05:24 UTC

Oh, wow.

Reno and Tseng play off each other beautifully, here. The metaphors for Reno's style and movement are very well-handled. And you capture Tseng's POV well indeed. Nice!