[Fic] Across Distant Shores - 8

[hazelator]

FF7 - Rating: PG-13 - Part 8/10? - Warnings: Violence
Pairings: Rufus/Reno (established) - Status: In progress, incomplete.

Summary: "You're stuck on the shores of Hell, and the only way out...is through." Shinra moves against its own, the President against the Vice President, with the Turks caught in between. All loyalties and motives are called

Comments

[ithronluin]

omg. im so glad im still awake at this hour. *__*;; *flails hands here* cliffhanger and omg- *incohorent rambling goes here*

XDXDXD

[ninestarbird]

The last few paragraphs about Reno was OUCH. I just love this perspective from someone from Shin-Ra about the events that happened in FFVII.

[hazelator]

*is an evil, evil person, giving NPCs names and characters :D*

[hazelator]

Added you to the f-list :D.

[celes_grant]

DAX DDDDDDD:

More intelligent commentage forthcoming

[celes_grant]

How on Earth do you make me care about NPCs I took PLEASURE in killing with those damn barrels?! You make me out to be some serial murderer when I was 14, argh!!

The attention to detail is nice XD exceptionally so. I remember her use of fire materia, I remember having to fight the soldiers if they got near you. I remember Cloud looking like he was running off.

The only thing more that I would have liked to have seen was something a bit more in depth with the interaction between Cloud and Reno. Understandably, Reno's not thinking too deeply about muchbut a certain vice president, but regardless... I recalled maybe they spoke to one another. Then again... Maybe it was all in Cloud's head XD.

In any case, I appreciate the attention to detail. You must have gone back and painstakingly took notes :3

[hazelator]

CEREAL KILLER :OOOOOO

Cloud and Reno, hm? *think think* Nope, afraid that that's not really going to happen in this fic....

I didn't take notes, but I did check the script XD.

[celes_grant]

Cloud x Reno =/= x_x