She's been so stressed out by work recently, that I couldn't not write her poor, neglected OTP for her ^_^. Thank you, and thank you again for your fic :D *goes off into corner to squee happily over it now*
I liked it... Tseng and Reno make a nice combination and definately seemed in character. (Why do I keep finding new pairings to squee over? This fandom is going to kill me!)
I'm going to get lynched for this, but my only complaint is that line breaks between Tseng's thoughts and the action kinda jarred me a couple of times at the start. It worked really well at the end though!
I know! The first line break was natural (I wasn't even intending to do something like that with the fic), but the second was downright clumsy. I was contemplating deleting the two space before the paragraph after that. The smoother blending towards the end was intentional, sort of like Tseng starting out abstracted and then everything blurring together until the boundary between thought and action isn't distinguishable any more... *rambles*
I simply adore how you went into details about the other Turk's thoughts, and also Rufus'. I really... am incoherently happy at the moment. I probably shouldn't be. But I am. ::Takes deep breath::
Let me make this shiny.
I like the analogies used here. Even if they're not earth-shatteringly amazing, there's still something to be said about tasteful familiarity. Reno's firey, Tseng's not exactly. Complimentary is a term I'd use for them, and I think that's the primary appeal I can see IN them.
And on that note; I think your Rude-take is superb. I was actually really impressed with the paragraph about him and his take on the entire ordeal.
XDDDDDDDD So glad you liked ^_^. I was like: MUST. WRITE. FIC. FOR. YOU. And it's just not fair that you have to wait longer because you're nice. And now I can sit back and take my time over the successor to this :D.
I don't mind waiting *zomgs* It's like a brilliant appetizer before a wonderful meal 8D. Thank you again for this. If I drew prawn worth a damn, I'd so have fanart for this shiny in no time.
Do you want me to add you back to the f-list so that you can read the locked stuff? It isn't much -- just one high rating fic (Fathoms Deep) and some original stuff.
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And damnit, I like it. <3 This pairing has so much potential (trainwreck and otherwise.)
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I'm going to get lynched for this, but my only complaint is that line breaks between Tseng's thoughts and the action kinda jarred me a couple of times at the start. It worked really well at the end though!
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I know! The first line break was natural (I wasn't even intending to do something like that with the fic), but the second was downright clumsy. I was contemplating deleting the two space before the paragraph after that. The smoother blending towards the end was intentional, sort of like Tseng starting out abstracted and then everything blurring together until the boundary between thought and action isn't distinguishable any more... *rambles*
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Translation: I have kittens XD.
I simply adore how you went into details about the other Turk's thoughts, and also Rufus'. I really... am incoherently happy at the moment. I probably shouldn't be. But I am. ::Takes deep breath::
Let me make this shiny.
I like the analogies used here. Even if they're not earth-shatteringly amazing, there's still something to be said about tasteful familiarity. Reno's firey, Tseng's not exactly. Complimentary is a term I'd use for them, and I think that's the primary appeal I can see IN them.
And on that note; I think your Rude-take is superb. I was actually really impressed with the paragraph about him and his take on the entire ordeal.
::showers with adoration:: awesome xD
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(Friending, so I don't miss your stuff.)
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Do you want me to add you back to the f-list so that you can read the locked stuff? It isn't much -- just one high rating fic (Fathoms Deep) and some original stuff.
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