Sunset : Chapter Three ~ I Hate Myself For Losing You.

Jan 07, 2009 16:00



Title : In My Arms

Author: Hayley_Cullen

Characters/Pairing: Bella/Edward/Jacob

Rating: 15.

Category: Romance

Spoilers: None.

Disclaimer: Unfortunately, I don’t own any of the characters, it all belongs to the wonderful SMeyer! If I did own Edward, do you really think I would let him out??

Summary: Bella and Edward have been friends forever! They really ( Read more... )

in my arms

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bellacullenpr January 7 2009, 17:42:42 UTC
I like this story.. please continue soon!!

I'm a fan fic addict! LoL

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hayley_cullen January 8 2009, 16:29:35 UTC
I am aiming to post the next chapter by the weekend. =D

Lol! Well I hope you continue to like this story! =]

Thank you for your comment!!

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twilight_topas January 7 2009, 20:00:14 UTC
When I read your Authors Note I though I melted away :)
Ha, yeah I knew it, she IS in love with him! Poor Bella wants everyone to be happy.
And I think this conversation with Jacob and Bella was a bit too quit and maybe even too short, I don't know maybe that was your intention, so he seems impatient and nervous.
Well, I'm excited for the next chapter :)
Oh, and I'm going to watch next week the twilight movie, and it's on my birthday can you belive this :D (14.01 just so you know ;)) And on top of that it's in englisch not in german, I don't think I will like the german synchro in this movie :/

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hayley_cullen January 8 2009, 16:25:01 UTC
Good, I am glad you liked it. I thought I should do something for you, considering you are the only person to actually comment on the whole of this story, and the last. So thank you. =]

Yes, Bella is in love with him. I wanted to include this in the chapter so everyone didn't think "So Jacob was right, she doesn't love Edward" because that would have been bad..
I am glad you pointed that out, because it was supposed to be like that, he is impatient and nervous! Mainly because he is worried about Edward effecting his 'relationship' with Bella.

Oh, that is so cool! How about I post the next chapter on your birthday??
I am sure you will enjoy it, and thats okay then, if you prefer to watch it in English!

Thank you for your comment!

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twilight_topas January 8 2009, 18:14:51 UTC
Next chapter on my birthday? That would be great! I would think that will be my best birthday ever :)
Well, I watch movies and tv series and read books mostly in english, so I don't have to wait to long for the german version and so I'm improving my english :)

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hayley_cullen January 9 2009, 15:53:30 UTC
*Blushes* You are too kind!
Good for you! Well, I didn't know you didn't speak English as a first language till you told me in your last comment! So it shows you are good at speaking English!

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mastaspammip January 7 2009, 20:14:28 UTC
aww poor edward.. bella needs to live her own life.. charlie needs to butt out;;

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hayley_cullen January 8 2009, 16:27:09 UTC
*sigh* I know, Charlie = needs to leave Bella alone. But unfortunately he needs to be a pain otherwise this story may not have worked out so well.

Bella does need to live her own life, but then again, when has Bella ever done something just for herself?!

Thank you for your comment!

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nermalasu January 8 2009, 07:12:06 UTC
just found this story and read all the chapters back to back! I am really enjoying it so far! I can't wait to see how this story develops! great job!

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hayley_cullen January 8 2009, 16:28:06 UTC
Thank you! I hope you do keep on enjoying it!

Thank you for your comment!

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