In My Arms : Chapter 1 ~ Beautiful Soul

[hayley_cullen]

Title : In My Arms
Author: Hayley_Cullen
Characters/Pairing: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Rating: I'm going to say 15. Just because. =]
Category: Romance
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, I don’t own any of the characters, it all belongs to the wonderful SMeyer! If I did own Edward, do you really think I would let him out??
Summary: Bella and Edward have

Comments

[bloodtype46]

Great start =]
I wonder what caused Bella so much pain :(
And what Edwards so worried about to make him hide his feelings. Hmmmmm.

Looking forward to the next update! xxx

[hayley_cullen]

Thank you. =]
Why Edward is so worried will be revealed in the next chapter. =]
And, you won't find out what hurt Bella for a while. Sorry!

[twilight_topas]

That story is amazing, and I don't know but I don't think it's jumpy, but that's just me xD
And I think you can tell your style of writing has improved :)
Can't wait for the next update!

[hayley_cullen]

Oh thats okay then. I was worried it was a bit jumpy. =]

Aww thank you!! I hoped it had improved a bit more now. I wasn't too sure though. =]