I knew I was going to enjoy it the moment I read an observation about something so normally mundane, preparing vegetables for a soup, looked at from a subtly artistic perspective that also informed the developing dynamic between the protagonist, who was the girl with the earring, and the painter, Vermeer.
Hey, looks fine to me. Commas in all the right places. Might have relocated that 'so', but other than that it's a perfectly fine sentence. :)
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Hey, looks fine to me. Commas in all the right places. Might have relocated that 'so', but other than that it's a perfectly fine sentence. :)
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