Four Sentence Doctor Who Fic: If You Want Something Done--

[hawkmoth]

Four-sentence fic, because three-sentence fic is hard!

Involving the possible identity of the "woman in the shop" as mentioned in the episode "The Bells of St. John." See notes at the end.

Title: "If You Want Something Done--"
Author: HawkMoth
Word Count: 195
Rated: G
Characters: Clara Oswald, the Woman in the Shop
Spoilers: All of Series 7

Comments

[lonewytch]

Very nice! I've never tried 3 or 4 sentence fic, i think i may be much too verbose! (in fact i've not posted a fic for waaay too long.)

I was going with the River theory for a long while too - but this makes perfect sense, and is actually possibly more likely. Lol at the Jammie Dodgers. And i like this :

"Run you clever girl--in the end we won't regret it," as she faded back into the future she'd just created for herself.

I also admire your discipline in doing so much with 4 sentences!!!

[hawkmoth]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Three-sentence fic challenges were making te rounds in a few fansoms recently and I read some gorgeous ones, but it is very difficult, I found.

I was hoping they would show us who gave Clara the hint; maybe it will be revealed in the 50th Special.

(I actually had "biscuits" first, but then i remembered what the Doctor had left at Clara's bedside...)