I don't plan these things!

[hawkmoth]

They just happen.

Doctor Who, Series Five, "The Eleventh Hour" ficlet.

Title: "Amy (Amelia) Pond, This Is (Was) (Will Be) Your Life"
Author: HawkMoth
Characters: Amy Pond, The Eleventh Doctor
Rating: G (Gen)
Spoilers: "The Eleventh Hour"

ETA: Slightly revised after another viewing of the episode.

Thanks to punklegolas for the icon.

Comments

[angel_of_doctor]

I love this. It's so sweet, funny and sad at the same time!

[hawkmoth]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[angel_of_doctor]

No problem.

[budclare]

:)

[hawkmoth]

Yea!

[ineptshieldmaid]

Oooh, I like that. Lovely messing about with the timeline. :)

[hawkmoth]

Thank you!

[inkvoices]

Here via ineptshieldmaid

Lovely fic! The formatting with the sections in parenthesis really works here and the tone feels spot on. (And I have a soft spot for the present tense *grins*).

I especially liked the part where Amy is wondering about the library with the swimming pool, looking for the wardrobe, and then being dragged back out of the TARDIS in her nightie. The pace matches the episode. And I'm still amused that the first thing she does when she sees him again is hit him over the head with a cricket bat.

I really enjoyed this :o)

[hawkmoth]

Thanks so much!

(I only ever use present tense for really short stories; it seemed to work best here.)

[elisi]

Absolutely delightful! :)