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It's All Relative 34

Oct 07, 2010 08:33

It’s All Relative 34
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated: PG, for language
Disclaimer: The majority of these characters are not mine. No copyright infringement intended.

A/N: All mistakes are mine. All my love and thanks to Rosemary for reading. Love to London Anne, my pal Jessica, xenavirgin, law_nerd and to Martha, my dear.

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Comments 43

radak October 7 2010, 15:00:01 UTC

great chapter as always!

hawkbehere October 8 2010, 17:03:55 UTC

Thank you, radak, for reading as always.

jfreda October 7 2010, 16:25:48 UTC

GOSH I love it when you add a chapter!

hawkbehere October 8 2010, 17:04:29 UTC

jfreda? You can't love it as much as I do. Thank you for reading.

mayireadtoday October 7 2010, 16:36:33 UTC

Very interesting that Miranda didn't blackball Alicia. Now that I think about it, Miranda didn't have to because Alicia was fired for cause.

"Miranda, John, Andy and the Castillos have obviously decided, to some extent, to co-parent their children, so we will consider Juan Carlo their sibling in our school." Interesting to have this out there. It gives me something to think about.

Awesome: "Badass is not a curse word-it’s a statement of fact.”

hawkbehere October 8 2010, 17:08:27 UTC

I think Miranda's, for the most part, beyond the vindictive stage of her life. And she's too big to stoop so low.

Badass is a statement of fact, IMO.

Thank you is a statement of fact, as well.

kdsusa3 October 7 2010, 17:08:05 UTC

This made my day darlin'. Truly it did. I find the mark of a great story or novel or anything written of the fiction variety, is the ability of the author to use words and characters to make it real for the reader. To give the reader the ability to 'see' what the author is trying to portray with their words, and you have that gift in spades. Your characters are real, and it can't get any better than that. Thank you for updating.

hawkbehere October 8 2010, 17:10:30 UTC

My leaf! You'll turn my head. What a sweet comment. And let's face it, kd, you've been kindly following them for a long, long time. Thank you so much for continuing to be so loyal to this story. I truly appreciate it.

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hawkbehere October 8 2010, 17:18:39 UTC

Hi, fic. That's so kind of you. I'm glad you continue to read and enjoy it.

Thank you re: my characters. Some of the loveliest and most compelling people I've met in my life, and cherish as if they were flesh, have been fictional. If I give any reader the sense s/he's met someone they're happier to have known, it pleases me.

Thank you.