It’s All Relative 29-B

[hawkbehere]

It’s All Relative 29-B

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[mayireadtoday]

Great lines: “See? Isn’t that the best thing ever? You’ll always be my worst-case scenario. I’ll hold onto you until the day I die.”

Hilariously awesome: “Why would that bother you? Oh right. You’d have to work. You couldn’t just lie there in bed as per usual.”

[hawkbehere]

I think Miranda is anyone's worst-case scenario. In case of emergency? There's always someone worse if she's in the room. I like her, despite that. Thank you for reading.

IAR 29

[icequeen1955]

I must agree with all the comments. Your Miranda and Andrea are the most real of all the characters we have read on this wonderful site. I love many of them but your characters have depth and reality. They recognize their own failings and yet still recognize their love for each other and that life is not all roses and sweetness and they also recognize their love. Take your time, your story is one worth waiting for. For all her faults Miranda is one incredible woman and Andrea knows this and of course vice versa. Miranda's realization that she is not the best for Andrea and Andrea realizing that she loves and will always love Miranda and is willing to deal with her rather than living without her is truth. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Re: IAR 29

[hawkbehere]

Thank you very much. I'm truly very glad and touched that you enjoy my version of the characters.

The rest? Romance and life are so rarely like fanfiction, are they? Heck, this fanfiction isn't even fanfiction...

Joking. Of course it is. Fanfiction very lucky to have readers like you. Again, thank you.

[quiethearted]

It has been decided. I'm marrying your vocabulary. That's just how it's gonna be. Accept it.

An update from you can brighten the gloomiest day and on what has been an exceptionally good day, it's a super nova.

Thanks you so much.

[hawkbehere]

Oooh!! Does my vocabulary get a ring?

(Uh oh! My vocabulary is staring at you, tapping her left foot--and I could modify that with a really great adjective for how that tapping sounds but she's the vocabulary, not me. I'm turning her head, see? As you just did, by the way. But I'm praising her while you sneak out the door. Close it softly. Perfect. Whew! That was a close one. Don't worry about it. I'll handle her. I handle her every day of my life.)

I take your point and I'll agree. It always makes me happy to hear anyone SAY she or he's had a great day. I mean, we all have them occasionally but how often do we actually admit it, even to ourselves?

If I added anything to your exceptional day, quiethearted? Oh yeah. Look what you did--you made mine happier as well.

The debt is mine. Thank YOU so much.

[quiethearted]

Ooooo...vocabulary is a power bottom! I love a good challenge. I have a foot thick dictionary. Think that would tempt her?

If I have brightened your day in any way it is only a small deposit towards all the times you've done the same for me.

[hawkbehere]

Oh, the places I could go with that. But I'll leave it at my goodness gracious me. Well played.

Thank you, quiethearted.

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[kdsusa3]

Hawk...I love you and your story. Thanks for posting this, it is so them. All I can say is SCORE!!!!!!!!!

[hawkbehere]

My leaf! Your reading and comments mean the world to me. You've always, always been here for this story and I love you. too. I think you've probably, ages/years back, found yourself bored knowing that. Thank you so.

[worst_liar_ever]

HBH! Awesome update. Love the little play fights. I always they would be a little at does with each other. This has a lot of realism to it!

[hawkbehere]

I think they'd fight all the time, too. Oh wait, I am writing that and don't need to...uh...write that again.

Thanks, w_l_e, for reading and for taking the time to tell me you liked it.