Off the Record.

May 10, 2013 11:28

Title : Off the Record
Pairings : Danny/Minor character, implied past Danny/Steve
Spoilers : Assumes knowledge of Imi Loko Ka 'Uhane, 3.21.
Rating : General

Notes : I had to make up a name for the secondary character in this fic, and given how little we know in canon, I suppose it could be considered an OC.( Fic here... )

spoilers, genre: romance, rating: g, fanfic, pairing: mcgarrett/danno, genre: fluff

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oh and... kahuna_burger May 10 2013, 15:35:52 UTC
... there is no tag for Danno/OC or Danno/minor unnamed in canon character, so sorry if the tags are misleading. I included the Steve/Danny one since a past or very messed up current relationship is implied.

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cmariad May 10 2013, 18:49:23 UTC
I'm 99.99% positive they DID give Savannah's camera operator a name in the show, even though I don't think we physically saw him. She looked into/at his camera as if to talk to him multiple times, as I remember, & she referred to him as TODD. So there was an actual character name for him you *could* have used instead of making 1 up. Just saying.

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kahuna_burger May 10 2013, 18:59:11 UTC
I was trying to remember and checked a few sites without finding anything. I thought she might have yelled his name when the camera went out so I found that scene online and watched it, but no name and the closed captions just listed "cameraman" for his lines. I'll have to review some of the earlier scenes when I get a chance. Not like it can't be changed in the story.

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superbadgirl May 10 2013, 21:04:33 UTC
Very nice. I like the outsider (soon to be insider?) view of Danny, and the hints of vibe Mike mentioned between Danny and Steve. :( that they weren't happy for Danny, though. I want those two crazy kids to work it out ... except I also like Mike. :)

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kahuna_burger May 10 2013, 21:27:01 UTC
Thank you. I love me some McDanno like nobody's business, but I wanted the "unseen but still more interesting to me than the guest star" character to have a shot. So, for the purposes of this fic, I decided that they took a shot at romance, confirmed that Steve is just too emotionally screwed up for an adult relationship and slipped back into Bromance With Daddy Issues. ;-) Don't worry, they still have love, and if I ever wrote a sequel, Mike and Cath could commiserate about how double dates feel more like Danny and Steve's date that they get to tag along on.

I'm glad you like Mike!

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abbeyrd62561 May 11 2013, 03:21:19 UTC
This was very imaginitive using the camera man as OC and then Danny, I have never read a story like this. I think you pulled it off just wonderfully. Thank you for sharing your work, I enjoyed the read.

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kahuna_burger May 11 2013, 07:25:11 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. It was one of those stories that popped into my head and pretty much wrote itself, so I enjoyed it too. :-)

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mcparrot May 11 2013, 05:54:41 UTC
I love that idea. Well done with the awkward... And you're right. Most camera men for a talk show would not cope with being shot at like that.

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kahuna_burger May 11 2013, 07:26:31 UTC
Faceless camera guy needed his props... and a date with Danny!

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