Comments | havenward: original writing: Motorcycle Vagabond (2/?)

havenward

original writing: Motorcycle Vagabond (2/?)

Sep 02, 2008 02:13

Title: Motorcycle Vagabond ( Read more... )

Comments 11

teithiwr September 4 2008, 02:49:15 UTC

She doesn't believe in ghosts. Not really.

Even when they chase her from one side of the country to the other. I LIKE.

The feeling of being nowhere and everywhere. Now that's the quintessential motel feeling, isn't it?

And doesn't think about why she avoids Texas in July. Really. It isn't her fault he has a broken heart. Ooh, intriguing!

Have you figured out a plot yet? I'm liking the snippets too, though.

ps. Yes. Will be going to bed right about now. *ded*

havenward September 4 2008, 04:14:49 UTC

::huggles::

I went home spent an hour and a half running around about dinner, and then died myself. Sleep is gooood... but not very productive > >;;

I'm really glad you liked it :D A plot would be nice, but alas, it has not revealed itself yet. She doesn't even have a name still!

teithiwr September 4 2008, 08:32:46 UTC

Eh well - I suppose when you're low on sleep, your body will just shut down in the end. :)

But you can find these things out by just drabbling about her - awesome!

Okay, now off to have lunch. Omnom! And it actually counts as lunch, since I've had a bit of yoghurt for breakfast.

havenward September 4 2008, 12:54:32 UTC

Drabbling about her seems to be working well, its true. I guess the thing is I know more about her past (mwahaha!) than her future? Hrm.

And I'm glad you told me to stick to the present tense. Its working sooo well.

Drabbles later today, I promise :)

You had breakfast? Now I know the world is ending! ;) hehe

thehighwaywoman September 4 2008, 10:59:08 UTC

Hmmm! I likes. She strikes me as very alone, but trying to be as numb as the vibrations of the motorcycle make her limbs. Like there's some great pain in her past (maybe only partially associated with Texas in July -- I get the feeling there's more to it than one man) that she's trying to outrun, and as long as she keeps going fast she'll stay just one step ahead.

*big thumbs' up* :D

havenward September 4 2008, 12:51:01 UTC

Thank you ::hugs::

And... you picked up all that from this? Its true, but wow. This didn't suck as hard as I thought it did! ::thrilled::

... and Neko just epic failed jumping off the desk, onto the 360, and collapsed in a pile of DVD cases... ::laughs:: Poor baby ran out of the room in embarassment...

Drabble request?

thehighwaywoman September 4 2008, 13:11:48 UTC

I loves me some literature analysis *g*

Ooh, drabble request. How about Sam and Dresden just bump elbows in a store or what-have-you; each looks after the other with a spidey-sense tingling and then... it's up to you. ()-:-)

havenward September 4 2008, 14:33:15 UTC

::stares at you::

You. Are evil.

That's not a drabble request. Its only pretending. Put that halo away, missy!

::flees the rabid bunnies::

fyrie September 7 2008, 07:55:55 UTC

You have such a knack with subtle description, I have envy. Just about the only thing I can manage is dialogue, so setting such a strong scene and emotions, is really, really spiffy :)

havenward September 7 2008, 08:01:11 UTC

Thank you :D I really adore your dialog though, it accomplishes as much if not more than my narrative. Its a totally different style, and it rocks XD

fyrie September 7 2008, 08:05:00 UTC

*g* I do recall my first fic attempts online back in 99 consisted a lot of a chum saying "btw, where are they? You didn't mention it" :D