You're welcome :) I loved seeing all the POV's this chapter!
I love Emma's "rebel streak". I stepped into Damien's shoes for a second, it must hurt to have a kid that doesn't believe you're her parent. But Emma seems to be the girl who won't back down when she wants something- and she wants her "real" parents. Hmm :)
At first I thought Grace saw her mom, but her mom is dead! Maybe someone else? Oh come that's quite the cliffhanger!
The twins are flipping ADORABLE! So is Mitch (Mitch is my favorite for now), but the problem is that there weren't any close-ups of Mitch! DX
Oooh, big mystery!!! ;D Exciting!!! I'm so excited to see what happens! Was that Grace's dear mother that we saw..? >:D
Emma seems a little silly though :P How can she think she's adopted if she's a CLONE of Jamie?! Silly girl. I'm excited to see where that's going though!
All the kids are so cute omg! <3 The little toddlers, naww :3
And Purple Lila... I see what you did there ;D Lol!
Well Grace's mother died remember? Hehe Emma is a tough cookie, she's admamint she's adopted, and thats going to have its own plot ;) I love the toddlers, specially Mia <3
Haha yeah, when I was typing it up the name Lila just came in my head, and then when it got to taking pictures and making the friend, I was like WHOA why not make her purple like purplelila? :D So yeah :P Thanks for commenting!
*sits and fidgets excitedly* So many things going on in this chapter! I loved the POV writing too. Emma, oh Emma! You silly girl! I have a bad feeling about this party! And Grace, be careful girl! I feel so bad for Damien, lucky for Jamie she's so distracted, the girls behaviour would only stress her out! Great chapter!
:D Hehe you know somethings that are about to happen, but I need to chat to you, I need your help with some of them :) I felt bad for Damien when Grace also shouted at him so I just had to make her apologise, I couldn't make him more sad! Thanks for commenting!
Thanks, I like writing the different point of views, it makes it easier for me to write lol. Haha yeah the cliff hanger is gonna be gooood :D Thanks for commenting!
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I love Emma's "rebel streak". I stepped into Damien's shoes for a second, it must hurt to have a kid that doesn't believe you're her parent. But Emma seems to be the girl who won't back down when she wants something- and she wants her "real" parents. Hmm :)
At first I thought Grace saw her mom, but her mom is dead! Maybe someone else? Oh come that's quite the cliffhanger!
The twins are flipping ADORABLE! So is Mitch (Mitch is my favorite for now), but the problem is that there weren't any close-ups of Mitch! DX
Great chapter :)
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I quite like cliffhangers...cause you never know whats coming ;)
Sorry bout Mitch, I'll add more of him next chapter, and make him the FC :D
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Emma seems a little silly though :P How can she think she's adopted if she's a CLONE of Jamie?! Silly girl. I'm excited to see where that's going though!
All the kids are so cute omg! <3 The little toddlers, naww :3
And Purple Lila... I see what you did there ;D Lol!
Great chapter :D
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Haha yeah, when I was typing it up the name Lila just came in my head, and then when it got to taking pictures and making the friend, I was like WHOA why not make her purple like purplelila? :D So yeah :P
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