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gavininshowers October 23 2009, 03:17:08 UTC
OH MY GOD!

I swear if cliffhangers were a living breathing this i would murder them xD

this was short, but so SO good.

*flails*
BUT WHATS HAPPENING WITH OLI AND ZACK!
i wonder if they got caught...or if they come home to no tom!

BLEH! i am goign to be checking in compulsively for the next chapter.

(FC ou non?)

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havah24601 October 23 2009, 03:45:05 UTC
I'm so sorry!
But I couldn't really answer the cliffhanger without changing the point of view and the chapter was over!

I'm so sorry!

You'll see more about them next chapter.

Next chapter on Thursday.

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x_cheapnovelty October 23 2009, 06:37:21 UTC
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

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havah24601 October 23 2009, 16:57:58 UTC
it's ok!

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mitchiemarie October 23 2009, 12:00:32 UTC
:0
no!!!!!!!!
tom!!!
DD:
t-t
why oli, why?
>__< was zack worth this?
0-0 not really? Kinda?
:s

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havah24601 October 23 2009, 16:57:29 UTC
>.<
I have no idea if it was worth it - I don't think he really anticipated this.

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xthehiddenghost October 23 2009, 13:28:06 UTC
OMG!!

Poor Tom!
Oli is going to die when he finds out!

I need to read more...very, very soon! x)

Great chapter as usual ^-^

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havah24601 October 23 2009, 16:57:03 UTC
I know.

I'm sorry, I had to do this.
He woni't die...he'll just...panic. :D

MOre thursday!

Thanks!

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shadow_hive October 23 2009, 22:41:35 UTC
Oh no, poor Tom!
Although fuck, the way he's restrained is so kinky and guhful

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havah24601 October 24 2009, 08:09:03 UTC
I know!
IT's supposed to be upsetting...not kinky!!! Oh well. :P

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shadow_hive October 24 2009, 09:40:18 UTC
*snugs them*
Well it turned me on! But then I am a boy and we are meant to be turned on by anything.....

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shadow_hive October 24 2009, 09:42:40 UTC
*snugs them*
Well it turned me on! But then I am a boy and we are meant to be turned on by anything.....

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