Dear Nothing - Chapter 1 {All Time Low, Sing It Loud, Bring Me The Horizon}

[havah24601]

Dear Someone,

My name is Zack Merrick. I’m 16 years old and I am being held captive. I’ve been in the same room for six days. I’ve got one window, but it’s tiny and very, very high up, so it’s no means of escape. However, that small window is more useful than I ever would have guessed. I watch the light change and I know that it’s

Comments

[shadow_hive]

That's so awesome, I'm real curious as to where this'l lgo now

[havah24601]

I'm a little curious to see where it goes too! MOre people read the first chapter than I Was expecting and now I feel like it has to be SPECTACULAR to keep my readers!

[shadow_hive]

:D I'm sure it will be!

[havah24601]

I'm not so sure...I'm already sturggling with the second chapter.

[x_cheapnovelty]

I LOVE THIS.
I was confused at first, but then I read it, and OMGBRILLIANCE.
:D

[havah24601]

Yeah, I need to find a way to fix the summary...it's REALLY confusing...
I'm glad that you liked it!

[x_cheapnovelty]

hahah just a little bit.
Oh, and I loovvee the pic you chose for Alex, I lol'd right out loud :)

[havah24601]

HAha, I love that picture too. It's ridiculous, but hey...

[mitchiemarie]

:OO
phsycotic thriller.
This is really good, Stephen king pops up when I thought of the
writer/genre that this reminded me of.
;)

[havah24601]

AH!
Psych thriller! YAY! I hope...
haha, I've never read Stephen King's stuff, I'm too afraid to! Even Stand by Me!
<3

[havah24601]

Oh wow, thank you so much! That;'s really, really flattering.
I'm glad that you like the concept! It was supposed to be more of a journal type thing, but hey! People thinking in letters work stoo!
YOU ARE WONDERFUL!
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this!

[havah24601]

Oh, I know the feeling!!! <3

I'm glad that you like it already!

[leighabelle]

When i read the summary I was a little skeptical but I'm glad I read it and I can't wait for more!
I wasn't shocked when I saw you wrote another abuse!fic. You tend to write a lot of those :) At least I know I have someone to rely on for my angst!
I think Jacky needs someone to support him -cough- Oli -cough-
I dunno, I've just never read a jack/oli and i think it would be interesting!
Anyway, I'm glad I'm gonna actually keep up with a story of your's. I won't fail at this one, I promise!

[havah24601]

Yeah...I need to rewrite the summary...I just don't know how!
Yeah, I go to town with the abuse, I know, but I do it for a really stupid reason - readers don't expect abused characters to have sex, and I'm not good at writing smut/I don't really like writing smut because I feel SO out of my league with it.
Jack does need a support system...I guess we'll just have to see if he gets one. *cough*
Haha, well I might fail at WRITING it, but I hope not.

[leighabelle]

Hah! You're not going to fail at writing.
I feel awkward at times when I'm writing smut. But usually when I'm done I'm like 'Heh, that wasn't so bad.'

[havah24601]

We shall see...
I just don't like it, it's weird.