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Advent '10 Fic: Ready or Not, Here I Come!

Dec 09, 2010 20:01

Title: Ready or Not, Here I Come!
Author: heddychaa
Characters: Ianto/Gwen/Jack
Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex
Genre:PWP
Wordcount: ~1555
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Doctor Who and Torchwood's characters, concepts, and events belong to their respective owners, including but not limited to Russell T Davies, Steven Moffat, and the BBC.
Summary: Naked hide-and ( Read more... )

gwen cooper, fanfic, challenges, torchwood, advent 2010, nc-17, prompts, jack/ianto/gwen

Comments 43

azn_jack_fiend December 10 2010, 03:07:06 UTC

So hot. This needs to go to the top of the sequel pile!

heddychaa December 10 2010, 03:19:00 UTC

OH MY GOD I HAVE A SEQUEL PILE NOW? AHHHHHHHHHH.

Thanks though, despite the heart attack.

_lullabelle_ December 10 2010, 03:21:05 UTC

Hot as hell. I'm joining the chorus of sequel-begging.

heddychaa December 10 2010, 03:22:53 UTC

TWO PEOPLE IS A CHORUS?

AHHH AHHHH

TOO MUCH PRESSURE. ::implodes::

_lullabelle_ December 10 2010, 03:28:27 UTC

I AM ANTICIPATING THE CHORUS.

FOR NOW IT IS A BEAUTIFUL AND INSISTENT DUET.

alt_universe_me December 10 2010, 03:48:03 UTC

AND THEN THERE WERE THREE.

:D

Thread 6

alt_universe_me December 10 2010, 03:59:57 UTC

Basically, the D/s undercurrent in this just rocks my world. M/F with the guy in control can sometimes be a little uncomfortable for me, but you are so clever with the dynamics that it felt just right. And is it my imagination, but does Ianto have Jack completely in hand toward the end of this?

NEVER STOP BEING AMAZING, BB.

heddychaa December 10 2010, 04:04:11 UTC

OMG thank you for complimenting the power dynamics bb! It can be really uncomfortable for me, too, so I'm glad to have pulled it out with minimum questionableness!

IANTO HAS EVERYBODY IN HAND. IANTO IS OUR KING.

Thank you, thank you!

lyryk December 10 2010, 04:28:49 UTC

OMG you totally nailed what was at the back of my mind and I couldn't put a finger on. I can barely ever read D/s with the man on top but this was just perfect.

heddychaa December 10 2010, 04:50:22 UTC

fhjdkfsdj YOU GUYS ARE MAKING ME BLUSH I FEEL SO TALENTED

Thread 5

lyryk December 10 2010, 04:24:37 UTC

You know, I always thought they were just messing around when they said they played naked hide-and-seek, but you seem to have made a believer out of me.

ALSO, FRILLY AND CORAL. WITH FUSSY LACE. AND THE LIP-BITING. I THINK I WANT HER ALL TO MYSELF.

ALSO ALSO: Even half-dressed he manages to look put together. AND: Ianto during sex is as inscrutable as ever. OMFG YES.

SO HOT. SO, SO HOT.

THANK YOU. THANK YOU.

heddychaa December 10 2010, 04:43:03 UTC

Haha, I think they were probably messing around too, but that doesn't negate GIVING IT A TRY.

YEAH ME TOO. MMM LINGERIE. I AM ALL ABOUT RUFFLY BUTTS.

Oh you're not on twitter to have seen my Ianto inspiration!:

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eldarwannabe December 10 2010, 05:00:23 UTC

This evolves into awesome sexiness, but you have to know that the opening had me LAUGHING SO HARD. GWEN IS MOSTLY NAKED AND SHE HAS WEDGED HERSELF AWKWARDLY INTO A BOX. THEY ARE iNVESTING WAY TO MUCH EFFORT INTO THE HIDING. CLEARLY THEY ARE ALL FOUR DEEP DOWN.

heddychaa December 10 2010, 05:02:05 UTC

JACK WAS IN A DARK DIRTY CRAWLSPACE. HE WAS COVERED IN DUST AND COBWEBS. ALL FOR THE PLEASURE OF GETTING GWEN AND IANTO NAKED BEFORE HE WAS. EXCEPT THEN HE MISSED THE GOOD PART.

JUST IMAGINE IF THERE WAS A "NAKED SARDINES" GAME OMG.

eldarwannabe December 10 2010, 06:20:50 UTC

HAHA JACK. OOPS.

NACKED SARDINES CLEARLY NEEDS TO HAPPEN. IANTO COULD HAVE TAKEN OFF HIS SHOES AND MUSHED HIMSELF IN AND JACK WOULD HAVE HAD TO FIND THEM.