The Long Hard Road Out of Hell 4/5

Mar 18, 2012 22:16

Title: The Long Hard Road Out of Hell ( Read more... )

fanfic, dbsk, jaejoong, tvxq, yunho, yunjae

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taemun March 18 2012, 20:19:15 UTC
:3

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hattukissa March 18 2012, 20:38:44 UTC
*glomps*

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taemun March 18 2012, 22:06:55 UTC
JJ is not there is he... TT___TT I'm so sure someone else is going to open the door, not Jaejoong... ;_; buuuhuuuuuuuu ( ... )

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hattukissa March 18 2012, 22:20:22 UTC
You'll find out in the next chapter ;) <3
Whaaah *__* *blush* I'm really happy I managed to pull off this genre, I haven't written angst like at all before @__@ so I'm glad it's good.. and not like all those predictable kdramas! I really wanted to make this realistic T^T that's why it was so hard to write for me... Actually I haven't even seen that video, maybe I should watch it XD of course I'm not offended :D
I still feel a bit unseure about the ending D:< I kind of want to change some things but I've put so much thought into this fic I'm starting to over think everything @__@ so I guess it'll stay that way.. and there's a happy ending anyway ^^ <3

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shupashta March 18 2012, 20:43:51 UTC
8D

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hattukissa March 18 2012, 20:45:49 UTC
*smooch*

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hattukissa March 18 2012, 20:54:15 UTC
You'll have to wait for the next part to find out how all this ends ;) thanks for reading and commenting <3

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ilukyuwook March 18 2012, 21:04:03 UTC
*cries*
I was waiting for this I knew it was coming but I did t think it hurt that much
oi the emotions from both and those hurtful words jj was dreading omg you killed me
there is a happy ending right? *stare at you*
Love it so much
Thankyu!!

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hattukissa March 18 2012, 21:10:54 UTC
*gives tissues* Sorry about that... ^^' but I'm happy it hurt cause I haven't really written that much angst before so... XD
There could be one.. ;) *stares back* I'm really happy you like it <3

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snow_meow March 18 2012, 21:05:55 UTC
I knew this breakdown in their relationship was coming.
Everything was moving way too fast and Yunho's addiction was bound to be the last straw to break everything apart.

I wonder will Jaejoong be there in his apartment or he has left for his studies.
If Jaejoong has left, it will be interesting to see how they will meet up again.

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hattukissa March 18 2012, 21:14:26 UTC
That's true T^T it didn't seem like they had much hope to survive everything... too much bad stuff going on in their relationship!
You'll find that out in the last chapter ;)

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