The garden

May 04, 2011 02:25

Okay. This is just funny now. A chapter and a bloody quarter in a DAY. :D

Damage control )

legion, a&a, writing

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torreadora May 5 2011, 00:58:37 UTC
You do very well in explaining how locations change without it being too complicated or confusing. Suddenly, a treetop! Suddenly, a sunlit gazebo! But it all makes good sense.

Poor Lucifer. I'm just, like... picturing a man. I picture him wearing like a cream-colored linen suit with no tie and bare feet, and his sandy beard, and weak and headachey on the gazebo floor. Not your usual lord-of-the-underworld state of being. (Who, I'm curious, is watching Hell while daddy's out?)

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hasu_hime May 5 2011, 08:22:34 UTC
Well, Hell was Satan's territory longgg before Lucifer arrived. Lucifer's more of a servant to Satan, really.

There's actually a like, platformy thing in the gazebo they're laying on side by side, like in the fortress of Hell, except bigger. I was thinking similarly to the one Aslan is killed on in Narnia.

And he's wearing the same salwar/harem trousers as before -- it gets pretty hot in Hell, with all the coals and such. :D Like these without the bow.

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