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harpinred

Second Chances

Aug 31, 2009 22:50

Second Chances

Rose sat with her back against the padded tapestry headboard that the TARDIS had designed for her those many months ago and frowned at the stationary in front of her. It was hard letting Mickey go. She knew it had been the right thing to do but it still hurt a little that she had been so easily replaced. She also knew she ( Read more... )

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karenor September 1 2009, 04:19:35 UTC

Aww, this was really sweet. And I love that it was entirely plausible, which is difficult to accomplish with this sort of prompt. Great job with the episode!

harpinred September 1 2009, 12:12:01 UTC

Thank you! Plausible was what I was going for so I REALLY appreciate the comment :)

jennyshepard September 1 2009, 10:34:15 UTC

I agree with karenor, that was very sweet. Although it had a slight sad note, since we all know how soon this newly found move in their relationship will end.
Though I'm a Ten/Rose shipper (means the first real move is made when the Doctor is already Ten), I always liked the idea of Nine/Rose...
Very well done!

harpinred September 1 2009, 12:16:19 UTC

Thank you for your comment! I like writing 9/Rose but it can be very challenging because Rose is so young - in more ways than age - at this point in their relationship. So I'm very glad that you liked it :)

muse_0f_fire September 2 2009, 17:14:44 UTC

I agree with Karenor that this is entirely plausible. You could really see this happening just like this.

It's also sad as anything when you get to the end and know what happens when the get to The Games Station. *sniff*

But it does fit with how they are after she gets used to the regeneration. Moving forward, but rather slowly. Wonderfully done.

harpinred September 2 2009, 23:48:33 UTC

Thank you very much! I know the timing is really sad. But in my little world, they at least had this ;)

Thank you for the review.

lorelaisquared September 3 2009, 16:16:42 UTC

I adore this. So realistic to the show, I can totally see it actually happening. And I love how honest they both are with each other and how they agree to go slow. It fits so well. Great work. :)

harpinred September 3 2009, 20:07:04 UTC

Thank you so much! :) It's always nice to get feedback like this as I really tried to fit this into cannon.

sunnytyler001 September 8 2009, 23:04:29 UTC

That was lovely! And deserves a sequel!

harpinred September 9 2009, 22:15:34 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

I don't have a sequel for this one but am finishing up a longer 9/Rose fic - with a dash of 10.5/Rose. It should be up soon.